So remember when I was just suddenly in Equestria? Everything had gone to hell and I died from blood loss like half an hour after I got there? Yeah well, I'm alive again and in a different Equestria... and this one doesn't look too much better...
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when the main characters of doesn't want to be the protagonist
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run Run RUN!!!
trial by fire
I can wait to read more of this amazing story!
I'd be just as mad or upset as Salvadore if I was thrusted into the hero role too... I mean I like helping others as much as I can but I hate promising something I'm not even sure I can keep like people's hopes alive and being a hero... so I can understand his reluctance to be a hero here, I think we all do honestly lol.
I wonder if this is like the cutie remark where each equestria will be worse than the last plus I can see why you made grindark twi into an alicorn as not only is her magical ceiling higher but she is effectively immortal also I wonder if her home equestria effectively ceased to exist as a nation without her knowledge
This is the aftermath of It Sleeps Beneath Foal Mountain, isn't it?
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Got it in one
Firstly, please pardon my somewhat drawn out review/opinion. I love your story! If it was a movie, it's the kind I'd probably watch, too (lol). I'm not going to lie, however, I should probably mention I did feel the beginning was a little so-so (not bad, though). However, around the moment the alternate version of Twilight was made Sal's multiverse traveling partner, the story started to really pick up. Actually, that part alone reminded me of Back to the Future 3 when the Doc saved Clara, the lady who was originally doomed to perish in history and said history was changed when he saved/married her. I really like where this story is currently going, and it is now certainly one of the more unique Fimfic's I've read in a bit. Personally, I'd like to see maybe even one more former Element of Harmony added to Sal's partners, if he ends up going to many more other alternate realities. Perhaps since both of the current main characters of this story are magic wielders, a more last minute non-magical heavy hitter of the Elements like an alternate Grimverse version of Rainbow Dash or Applejack? As for where this alternate version of Twilight end's up in the end, it would be interesting if instead she ended up in Equestria Prime (Original Equestria), but kinda' just did her own thing outside Twilight Prime (learning to make new close friendships outside the main 6 to better her life/do other things besides work with royalty). She'd deserve a nice place after going through these nightmare realities, lol. I also believe, since Sal is a writer, that a few Grimverse Equestria's he might have "created" (perhaps with even more crossover's from your own actual stories like It Sleeps Beneath Foal Mountain, as seen here), would be interesting to see, as well. Again, I look forward to continue reading this story.
I'm loving the story can't wait for more!!
Love the story so far
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Are you continuing this story?
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Yes, but I have another non-pony story taking up my attention atm. Once I get a few more chapters out I'll probably be making an annoouncement. That said, I haven't forgotten about all my other pony related fics.
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Oh ok! It’s fine to take a break from a story to work on another!