So remember when I was just suddenly in Equestria? Everything had gone to hell and I died from blood loss like half an hour after I got there? Yeah well, I'm alive again and in a different Equestria... and this one doesn't look too much better...
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Previous chapter, that unknown being:
End of this chapter, Discord:
Hmm. Either:
A: Discord is also that being
B: There's another Discord from some alternate universe who "powered up" and became some greater being on the loose (would explain why they talk similarly)
or C: Just coincidence.
It was the hyperbolic time chamber!.. No? Well I tried.
https://youtu.be/Zw6YxwOcg_A
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I'll just tell you now the answer is C.
Nice to see an update and it was fun to see both Twilight S2 and Twilight Prime interacting with each other. it was also nice to see that we get a more clear goal, but I wouldn't trust other being that made a deal wither, let's hope our protagonist will figure out what to actually do with it. It also seems like Twilight S2 also is getting the alicorn upgrade. Keep it up dude, I am still watching this.
I'm just waiting for the spin-off where each chapter is just one-offs of this concept. Good stuff though.
Uh oh. Canon Twilight is starting to get drawn into this mess.
And she met Grimdark Twilight for the first time. Nice.
Although it looks like she just met the most-likely Lovecraftian antagonist that’s probably behind the Grimdark universes in the first place, if I had to guess.
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An editor is always best, but Grammarly picks up a hell of a lot more than you'd think. If you've grown in skill since then and know how to self edit, using it is like a win/win. Not that you'll catch everything that way, obviously, but it helps.
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Yes, I know it didn't seem that way. It's just, the pacing was rather frustrating in terms of what kind of story this really is. You also have to admit, it took your OC far too many chapters to even attempt using Magic considering the life-threatening situations that he was in. But, I grew to like this fic.
Glad to see another update.
The white void kinda reminds me of that one story on here where twilight made the "empty white void" dimension
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It does, doesn't it?
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Lmao so i was right about the A/N.
I thought the title was familiar
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/343376/white
Great story
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Oh no, this was a reference but not to that story.