While on a job to deliver supplies to a new colony in the Andromeda Galaxy, something goes horribly wrong. David Lawson finds himself the sole surviror of a devestating crash on an unknown world. An unkown world full of colorful talking ponies...
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Your world building is A Grade. Keep it up.
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Thank you so much! I made that a huge point to work on while writing and I'm so glad to see it's paying off.
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Thank you. I'm really glad you like Midnight. She's got to be my favorite OC I've ever made.
He demonstrated loyalty. I think think the heckler actually came off worse in that exchange, since 'I'm glad your friends are dead' is contrary to everything pony society values.
Well this was another good read so far, I will be very interest to see what that headache is going to be all about. Keep it up.
great chapter hope to see more soon
Damn rich ponies. I know not all are like that but still.
Wen i read that, my first though was like get a chair and smack him with it like a golf club.
Why do I get the feeling that particular Noble was His Royal Assness Prince Blueblood...?
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Originally it was going to be much more harsh, but I felt like the ponies wouldn't be that cruel. Even the Canterlot snobs.
I guess the Human cuteness isn't effective on strangers.
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But the though is still there isn't it?
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Potentially. I have this set right after the end of Season 4 when Tirek attacked, so the ponies are a little on edge about new creatures, so it would make sense that they are a bit fearful and even hostile to an alien that appeared out of nowhere.
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I think of it like this. You know how most people would argue that dogs are adorable and cute right? Despite that, there are still people who can only see them as dumb pests or ugly, no matter how much you try to convince them otherwise. I feel like ponies have much of the same different opinions when it comes to David. Not all of them are going to think he's cute. Combine this with this story taking place right after Season 4 and Tirek's destruction, and you have ponies afraid to trust a new creature that some of them don't like anyways.
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True, in that mindset the pony´s views on humanity were already broken at that point, sure that must be some sort of anti catalyst plan in the future right?
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Yeah that makes sense, I mean I remember in Afghanistan the locals hated dogs. Viewed them all as pests, but on the other hand we think dogs are pretty awesome and cute. Awesome story though, I really like how you write your characters with lots of personality.
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Well thanks so much! I've really tried my hardest to make the characters as realistic and personable as possible. Luckily, I've had a great editor to make sure I don't miss important details. But that aside, when were you in Afghanistan? And what branch?
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I was there in 2017 for about nine months, currently still in the army.
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Nice. I haven't deployed, but I'm in the army too. How long have you been in for?
I can't wait to find out who He is.
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In due time, my friend. In due time.
He knows the Five D's of Dodgeball!
Perhaps you meant end zone?
Oh. You really should not have said that...
[Later that day]
"I'm sorry princess, I didn't realise murder was not OK, guess I'm still getting used to your culture."
Seriously though, I would struggle to walk away from that without a few choice words.
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Hehe, same. Honestly, I had a bit of a hard time writing that to be honest.
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Yo, that dude is deed
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should be dead you mean and yeah.
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That pony right after:
Cryptic foreshadowing detected. Stress headaches from guilt and lack of sleep? Lingering head trauma? Imminent hornsprouting? Who knows!