While on a job to deliver supplies to a new colony in the Andromeda Galaxy, something goes horribly wrong. David Lawson finds himself the sole surviror of a devestating crash on an unknown world. An unkown world full of colorful talking ponies...
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... I ship it.
I think Midnight is cute.
Neil Armstrong was not the first man to leave the earth though
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That was Yuri Gagarin
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aye
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You're right, but David didn't say Neil Armstrong was the first person to leave the Earth. He said he was the first person to leave the Earth and land somewhere else.
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<3
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That makes 2 of us ;)
great chapter hope to see more soon
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Thank you. I'm really glad you liked it :D
I got my eye on you. (it's good so far)
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Thank you! I hope you like the future chapters :D
There was nothing wrong with him having that relationship with Celestia in the story, it was actually very endearing.
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Oh thank god. I'm really glad you think so. I've kinda been holding my breath for the last couple of days because of that part. I'm really happy to see that it wasn't stupid or out of character for Celestia to you. Thank you :)
But what about the Russians, they too left the Earth.
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It's like I explained before, David's words were that Neil Armstrong was the first human to leave the planet and land somewhere else I made sure to specify that because of the Russians you're referring to
Funny fact, the transmission did not pick it up, but what he actually said was, 'That's one small step for a man, one giant leap for mankind.'
I liked this chapter quite a bit.
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Luna is like facebook. But worse. She knows when you are sleeping, she knows when you're awake, etc. etc.
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You know the original meaning of term facebook? It's a log for official occasion or clubs, where every person is registered, described (at least essential things), all proper titles are given. And their arrivals and leaves are signed down.
To be honest, I wouldn't have minded more of them. Unless there's more later. Which I doubt. But still. ;] I know there's a lot of that elsewhere, but this story seems to be aiming for "smart", and that doesn't happen all that often.
And yes, I did assume she was trying her best to be friendly. Doesn't mean she can't get something direct out of it as well, right? I mean... free scratchies.
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I'm glad you thought so. I'll be honest, I kinda just wanted to show Celestia some love and figured this way made the most sense.
This guy is going to have a field day when he meets Discord, trust me this is nothing.
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He is in for a few surprises to be sure :D
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What I find interesting is that a military trained medic is exposing herself to all kinds of alien pathogens and diseases by performing field surgery on David. Also they must not have even thought about extraterrestrial encounters because I sure wasn't seeing any first contact procedures/ protocols being executed. The lack thereof is a bit disappointing but not enough to cause me to not continue reading this story.
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For the sake of not making this story beyond difficult to write and full of scene's revolving around that very thing, I decided to go the route most stories do and just not really acknowledge the alien pathogens and such. Otherwise, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far :)
I hope you continue to read and enjoy this story and its sequels :)
Alright moving in together, interested in seeing where this will go from here.
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I've read stories where they focus on the language barrier, the potential pathogens and diseases. Some just throw a chapter at it and say magic made it easy to fix, others have taken lots of time to address it before progressing the story any further.
I personally don't think the idea of skipping it, is a bad idea. I look forward to seeing how all this progresses from here.
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I'm glad you're liking the story. Yeah, I figured that going into disease and such would take away from this story and the plot, so I decided to not include it. I do cover it a bit in a sequel story though.
Oh yeah, Midnight wants deep in his pants
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She wants that Human brand Vitamin D heh
the correct answer is:
a) don't threaten me wit a good time!
b) don't start something you can't finish
c) Voulez-vous coucher avec moi, ce soir?
d) all of the above
And so it begins... the great shipstorm of our time!