While on a job to deliver supplies to a new colony in the Andromeda Galaxy, something goes horribly wrong. David Lawson finds himself the sole surviror of a devestating crash on an unknown world. An unkown world full of colorful talking ponies...
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You know what's funny? The word count for this story rounded out to 69 thousand words. Don't know if that was intentional to coincide with this chapter, but either way, double nice
lawson huh any relationship to miranda lawson
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Perhaps...
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Perhaps...
Very well done! Really enjoying this romance!
Awww, so cute. A nice way to end a passionate evening. I can't wait to see what happens next chapter!
huh.. for some reason this never showed up on my notifications..
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hey uh idk if you notice but theres no image on the website that you linked
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You have to be logged in to see it. It is NSFW
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ah ok
Why does it seem that people on this site have trouble with differentiating between shuttered/shuddered?
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:( It will be fixed.
Not.. bad. NOT BAD. Damn, the build-up was definitely worth the wait. Now post that other chapter, I know you have them!
great chapter
I really like this story.
Two for twoooooowa Two for twooooowa Twooooooooo- minutes. Two minute heaven is better than one minute heaven
Perfectly fine. I got curious so I poked on the Wikipedia page and the Nipple page says "It is often called a teat when referring to non-humans."
Compare that to the introductory paragraph for Wikipedia's "Hand" page.
If something is generally used for humans and humans alone, then it's pretty safe to assume that the subtext is "we don't use this for animals because they're not sapient".
"shuttered" is what windows do. "shuddered" is what humans do.
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I gotta say my dude, u write one MEAN CLOP. Great work with this chapter, it was really enjoyable.
That was really nice. I really like how sweet and caring they both were, the lust second to the love. This is a special kind of clop. A good kind. Also, dud, oral like this is vanilla.
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-_Ƣ ~ Stay classy.
Now this...I wasn't fully expecting. I was thinking it would be rather nice, perhaps decently good, but...damn. This was beyond amazing. I could feel the passion flowing from the words in this chapter. I don't know what you did, but you just have such a way with words here, describing how much they love each other and all the kissing that they did with the foreplay...just amazingly breathtaking. I could feel my heart pounding as I read this it was that intense. I think I may have to take a few notes for my own stories as well. Seriously, well done my good sir, well done indeed.
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Thank you so much. That really means a lot to me that you enjoyed my work so much. I'm really proud of how this chapter turned out, and I'm thrilled by how many people enjoyed it. Hopefully you'll enjoy all the sequels I have planned 😉
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Hey, dude - I know you did a notice there at the top, but this was pretty good. You'd rightly think it wasn't enough for me, since I would normally expect something much more kinky, and you'd obviously be right... but here's the key distinction: this wasn't "sex" or "porn", this was lovemaking. And, as far as lovemaking goes, it's up to the characters - I can't hold anything against them, it's up to them how far they want to take this thing. It's part of the story, and that's the final argument that will take no other. So relax.
Besides, if I came here for clop, the number of chapters leading up to this one is about 11 too many for my patience. ;] I think it's fair to say I'm not here for clop. And a word of advice: this isn't a "bonus", either - but rather a natural progression of the story. You know what this is? Chapter 12.
Anyone says this ain't enough for them - you just send them to a random clopfic, yeah? This ain't that.
Have a text error.
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Dude I just found this and I can't agree more
As others have said, this isn't clop, but rather an endearing piece of equine erotica.
So... Is it possible for Midnight to give birth to a hybrid in the future sequels?
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That's something that'll be answered in one of the sequels ;)
This scene was approached very well. Very genuine, and heartwarming. I know you prefaced this chapter with the AN, but this was very appropriate according to the background of the characters. I love these two so much
I love this, this was executed so well!
Hold right the fuck up!
What kind of futuristic human augmentation did he go through, to cum twice in one sex session/interval?!
Was David a jiggalo and/or a porn star before he left to do space colonization stuff?
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No es tan raro que eyacule 2 veces, lo que cambia es el volumen.
No le gusta que la enpalen y es comprensible, un caballo de 1.62 hasta la cruz tiene un pene de 50 cm, una yegua del mismo tamaño tiene una vagina de 30 cm ¿Cuánto le medirá a una yegua de 1 m de altura?