• Member Since 27th Mar, 2012
  • offline last seen Aug 13th, 2017

Hayquill


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Miscellaneous stories that individually fall short of the 1000-word minimum length.


Revised Report
Twilight reflects further on the events of Feeling Pinkie Keen.

Night Whiskers - [Adventure][Comedy]
Ahuizotl's servants have many eyes.

Forever
I asked the wind about forever.
“A bird is forever,” the wind said.

Zambucca National Anthem
Written for one of my nations in >CLOP.

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 5 )

I believe I shall assign this piece a number of opposable digits directed skyward. I look forward to further contributions to Prompt-a-Day!

:rainbowderp: Two entirely different perspectives from two separate narrators, both using the same tense and pronoun, yet each remains unmistakably distinct throughout. Are you aware of how hard this is to pull off, despite your making it seem so effortless?!

Basically what I'm trying to say here is WRITE MORE. If you don't feel like writing about ponies, then write about something else, but please, just write. Between this and Forever, you have a clear and impressive talent for wordcraft, and I would loathe for it to waste away from disuse. (Unless you're already writing plenty but I can't tell because it's just not visible here on this site, in which case, keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:)

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Thank you! It's rare to get feedback that's both detailed and encouraging; I know I don't do enough of it.

"Our Lord is Forever
He spun these twelve limbs upon two bodies out of nothingness, upon this world he had likewise created.

You are Half-Forever which is Forever
Entrust your fickering candle to him and your Forever will be joy."

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