Luna's loneliness caused her to take drastic measures to try and cure it. Her plan was to try and create a friend. When her plan failed, her disappointment threw her over the edge and she became the dark figure known as Nightmare Moon. During the thousand years that Luna was banished, her creation was left to wander the land of Equestria on his own.
This story takes place between Season 2 and Season 3. An idea in this story has already been done in Season 3 (you'll know it when you read it), but I had the idea to make this story during the summer of 2012.
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I don't know why people are disliking this.
Heck the title is great! LIKE. FAVORITE. Keep it up author.
It seems pretty good to me. Not to many spelling errors, cool name, and decent enough character introduction. Maybe its the overly used I- Don't- Know- Anything- About- Myself thing? But come on people, this has been a greet story so far and if that's good enough for me it's good enough for everyone!
The previous comment is absolutly correct. Your sentences are choppy, incoherrent and seriously need some work. It seems like you're getting your sentence structures from 4th grade student journals. This is clearly a story you want to write for personal reasons, so please don't stop, but if you are seriously trying to entertain the ponyfolk with it, I would suggest a different method of writing. Try reading your sentences back often, and keep a sharp eye out for punctuation.
Previous comment is forgetting to mention the cardinal rule of writing dialogue:
ONE character speaking, ONE paragraph (Bold for emphasis)
Well, it's been a long time. Let's hope all this time to myself has improved my writing at all.