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I wish he always carry weapon called Lasso of truth from Wonder Women no pony believe or trust him . I'm not sure is good idea or bad .🤔
TOOO OP! Sorry but i really dont like those who start off godlike without a single shred of sacrifice. He may have a troubled past but what did he truly do to earn it? Im not saying i hate it i just feel he got too much right of the bat. Equestrian Honor Guard series had the character earn it. many others did too so i just feel he could've had less at the start and gain all the others through seperate trials
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Isn't that what most displaced stories are about? Like gaining the powers of someone who worked entire life times to become powerful and a random guy pays the merchant a few bucks ?
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God damn that's a lot of information ain't no one gonna remember all that.
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That's the point. It would be boring if you already knew wich attack's he's gonna use
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I’m agreeing with Sanguine on this one, as normally they gain a select few powers of the character they cosplayed as, or in rare cases, wanting to be the character as well as other things. This said displaced usually start off with non OP powers and usually work up to gaining the final magic spells that could spell doom for almost anything in their way, explained in what he mentioned. Don’t take this as an attack on your story though, it happened to me a few times, but I was trying to explain that some people prefer to work for their OPness rather than getting as soon as they spawn into the world; it’s less fun watching the MC (main character) blaze though the enemies in this story while in another the MC will either use his knowledge on how to defeat the enemies while not getting killed or running away (Something that happens a couple times in stories.) to also prevent getting sent to limbo. Thank you for reading, and good day.
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Not every fight can be won with pure power and brutality, also mathael has the capability to be completely op, but thanks for the demon in his neck, he must carefully choose his moves and not just throw spells at everything, besides he has the powers of many characters, but many of them share weaknesses and so mathael has an entire net of strenghs and weaknesses.Thanks for the comment tho.
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perfect you had perfekt
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Thanks, I sometimes write some words in german rather than in english, old habits die hard I guess.
Does that count other universes to?
Damm just damm he has epic powers.
So hitting your toe and something hits your crotch on the way down?
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Add salty tabasco sauce in an open face wound and you are close to that level of pain.
You forgot the powers from Dragon Ball
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... Okay I actually did forget them... I'll fix it today
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Yes, but that would have required actual effort.
Do you have an editor? If not, I do have some time on my hands, and it would make me feel better to see such potential not being held back by not so good grammar.
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Well, I do have an editor who is currently busy with editing this Story, but he is going to send me the results when he is done with all Chapters. But, if you want to try editing, I have no problem with it, in fact, I would appreciate it as sometimes Chapters can be up to 40k words long which takes a while to edit for one person, so all help is nice.
... ... I admit I just skipped past the portion of the chapter that just consisted of an info-dump. Getting a spell / power list is actually counterproductive since we, as readers, will probably be able to spot a "Well if he just _____" it'd just make the protagonist look more and more like an idiot for not realizing it himself...
The more power a character has, the more annoying it is when they get embroiled in something that relies on plot armor or protagonist dumbassery to continue to be a 'thing'.
My dude the problem with bombarding us with all your god like powers is that we won’t remember more than 5
Ohh and by the way, you still have to acquire the redlight virus on the casual way. Have fun
It's blacklight virus that is the shapeshifter not the redlight
redlight is the one that caused the zombies blacklight can make redlight but you can't get blacklight from redlight
I think I am not sure if i am remembering the 2ond part right
I smell..... HEAT SEASON! RUN FROM DA MARES!!!!!
But what if you also got Saitama's unique abilities....hmmmmm? HMMMMMM?!
I’m fucking sorry, ever heard of overpowered?
Uummmmmmm then cant he just destroy the universe?
No lo creo, todavÃa le falta y mucho.