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I swear your chapters just keep getting longer.
9095539
Reading and writing long Chapters is super Fun!!! Editing Super long Chapters isn't! I spent like 4-5 hours with editing... I think the Chapter is now written on my brain.
9095563
THIS was the best chapture yet. I liked the songs u added in it which made it even more cooler. This made my day a joyous one. Though there is one thing I'm wondering about. What happen to the soul she has. And by that, I mean the one where she was abel to ascend to be the replacement of the original gods like Faust and mathael?
9095571
I am happy that you like it. What happened to her soul? That will be explained in the beginning of the first Chapter. The other gods are not dead, they are just evil thanks to the Corruption. By ascending I meant turning into a completely new and much more powerful monster by absorbing another powerful creature. I plan to build in what happens when one absorbs the other, like what the nightmare horse did to Dullahan in the battle in the temple. If you mean what happened that Sindrael lost the Soul of Darkness? That will be explained or rather hinted in future Chapters, but I want to write a short Story called "Discords past" shortly after Discords defeat. I don't want to spoil anything, but it's not gonna be about Don't You Dare Discord and can be read without knowing anything about Don't You Dare, but you might miss a thing or two.
9095605
Hmmm very interesting, well that explains a lot. Well might as well wait for the next chapture to see what happens. Also we ( by "we" i mean us reader's) will miss u when u leave on ur field trip. And on the last day of ur field trip is my birthday (August 18). Just wanted to let u know.
9095625
Yeah... Even if I write a "short" chapter, it will still take about 3 weeks to write. I would love to wish you a happy birthday in advance, but here in Germany that brings missfortune so, I am going to wish you a good evening, my dear Reader
9095634
And too u as well my good friend. Hope u have a great school year tomorrow
...that guy at the end sounds like joker, or mad hatter from DC
9095691
Good, it seems like I chose the right words for his Character
9095763
dude you might be the new nosferus my man XD
FUCK YOU DAINN!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dan VS and Asura’s Wrath
9096266
Holy crap, you’re right!
Speaking of flurry heart, i imagine her with that look
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Am not speaking of the armor (or the lack of it) but more of her eyes. I just imagine her giving that look to shinning armor.
Sombra laugh at you misery!
.... that explain why they have so much stairs in this castle
9096266
I feel flattered that you think so
9096273
I couldn't have said it better
9096358
Dainn (a mortal rapist) vs Mathael (a litteral god)
...
Dainn thinks he had chance to win from the beginning.
Dainns stats:
Intelligent -99
9096893
Wow, that's good fan art even though it's a bit revealing. Sombra, an sadistic jerk, during his life time and after his death.
Good luck with next chapters.Your story simply amazing and it become more and more interesting)
9096942
Thanks, my dear Reader, I am happy that you think so
9096935
I put the link of the guy Here if you want to see more of is (her?) Art
They are sublime like this oneimg00.deviantart.net/f8d7/i/2018/111/d/b/_commission__darl_a_loral_by_girlsay-dc9f8zb.jpg
9096952
That man/woman has talent and it wouldn't surprise me if drawing was his job.
Btw, Flurry hearts eyes, in the last picture, are the eyes of someone who will not stop until she murdered someone she hates.
9096964
That why it perfect if she give that look to shinning armor
How long Mathael return home and MAN! This is so hard to finish reading God damn to long but fun enough. Heh heh heh?
9096968
... I am slightly creeped out by this.
9096982
The more the better it is. I am happy that you liked it.
9097014
What? With how shining armor is in your story i think she can have many reasons to hate him.
Hell he was going to make people rape her or do it himself with how he was in 'fall of equestria' arc so i think she have good reason to hate him.
9097025
Shining Armor, the embodiment of an asshole. Btw, I already have bits and pieces planned for when Flurry heart will be revealed.
9097047
Excellent cant wait to see it but take your time (i contradicted myself i know, i need to sleep)
9097084
Good night, or was it good day?
9097088
It 7am for me i need help
9097097
7am!? It's half past 1pm for me (13:27) and yes, I think you maybe should get an hour or ten of sleep.
If I may voice my opinion, you've started to drowned story with details. I now good details is important but you've started go off the deep end with it. At the beginning I thought it was perfect it was funny, it shows the ups and downs of the characters you feel there emotions. But now the excessive details are killing the story. A lot of people don't like the massage amount of details because you get use your imagination because everything has been made in a way it's suffocating anything that person finds good. And for that reason I'm asking is that you tone it down a bit.
9097448
Hmmm... I 'll try to remember that. It's kinda heart to keep a Chapter as a whole in check if it's 41k words long.
9097466
Yeah that's a nother thing a lot of people I know that also read this don't have a lot of time on there hands so I can tell you for a fact that they would appreciate you cutting it down bit.
9097566
When I wrote short chapters, people wanted longer Chapters. When I write long Chapters, people want short Chapters. But I have to agree on one thing... Writing long Chapters, can be very annoying with all the editing work. So, I doubt I'll be writing another 30k Chapter in a while.
9097592
10-20k is more than good enough for me
The only thing I hear is cicero.
That twisted corpse humping clown.
And I killed him for only one reson when I did the dark brother hood quest line in Skyrim and it was none of these, he was just creepy.
9097088
Fucking love this story.
Mathael’s S.P.E.C.I.A.L skill if he was in fallout equestria.
Strength: over 9000 and beyond.
Perception: can practically see everything.
Endurance: has a fuckton of magic to use and survive attacks that should have outwright killed him.
Charisma: can convince any mortal to stop being dumbass.
Intelligence: can outsmart Albert Einstein and the Doctor from Doctor Who.
Agility: able to outrun the flash and kill someone with a blink of an eye.
Luck: Apparently the luckiest person to be the most O.P anthro alicorn ever of all time.
Bonus: is the god of fucking darkness.
9098156
Phew. You have no idea how much easier it is to write and editing 20k Chapters than 40k Chapters. And it's more than twice as easy.
9098312
What can I say? I am good at writing short texts that creep others out. Muhahahaha
9098425
Fucking love Reading Comments!
9098587
M. L. G.
Mathael La Dieu
Mathael the god
When you are so powerful that even france gamers respect you.
Btw, thanks for taking the time to write that comment, it was fun to read
9098736
Don't worry, Mathael will find ways to pay Blueblood back really good.
9099224
Same, it's interesting what people say on deh interwebz.
9097592
Here's some advice... Don't bother with us when we say longer chaps, or shorter chaps we aren't writing it YOU are, write what YOU like, take however long YOU want, and post whenever YOU want. It's your story not ours. If people don't like it they can either deal with it , or stop reading. We can't force you to do anything, stick with what you're comfortable with mein freund. (I mean come on, if you got stuff to do and have to stop reading mid-way whatever this story is on the internet pull it up later when you got time.) But those are just my thoughts on people saying make them longer, or make them shorter
9099445
I you say so. The problem is with, writing as you like, many might not like it. The reason I care so much for my readers opinions is because of how people rate the story. If many people like it, it's more likely for them to read it, but most people dislike after reading Chapter one, a Chapter that pissed them off or from just seeing the description which is dumb. I want that many people read it and have a good time, but maybe I did go a bit too far so that I had less fun.
9102781
He also has a couple thousand in his pockets, pants, shoes and other parts of clothing. Mathael just talked about his sleeves and did you ever try to put 1001 tricks in your sleeves? It's impossible!
And you are extraordinarily outpowered
9103445
Still, only?