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Fear the old blood....
Pff, I am immortal. What could possibly go wrong?
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*In a world beyond any gods reach*
A single individual was sitting in a fancy living room surrounded by thousands of books and mirrors that showed the lives of every creature, a being with a large M on his mantle, sat on a comfortable red armchair while drinking fine red wine. Suddenly, the being felt a disturbance in the Karma. It stopped its moment of peace and put its drink aside as a creepy, inhumane smile crawled across his face.
"Welp... Time to ruin another day for another guy who messed with the one and only. Murphy."
Thanks for the newest post and great to hear from you, thought you had disappeared.!
Woo new chapter . I’ll go over editing it later today. My November 16 break is coming up so that’s when I’ll be sending all the edits
That.....was different. Also more story, looking forward to the next update
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Disappeared? Dear goodness no! It's just school was a bit hard lately. Chrome suddenly decided that it didn't like Fimfiction for like three weeks in which I had to look for a new way to write, then had to get used to writing somewhere else where each row is much shorter and had to copy and paste each code for color, size, etc. In other words, take my usual 40 hours of completing a chapter and add like 10 hours on top of that which I the reason this Chapter was a bit harder to write and thus took like two weeks longer.
Me: sees new chapter ooh
Also me: sees chapter length well fuck
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Thanks and good to hear. Btw, I hope you will enjoy your free time
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Yay... I hope too... Welp, see you when Half-life 3 comes out. I will probably write another Chapter or two or 'A rewritten Past' before I start writing the next Chapter on Don't You Dare.
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Well... I see you at 3 am
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I could actually see that happening. *tries to bribe Murphy to look at some other random shmuck* I hope that works.
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Through a mail accident, the money landed in an orphanage where it has been used to improve the children's live conditions.
*Somewhere where no god can ever go*
In a fancy mansion, lived the most powerful and feared creature in the multiverse, Murphy and he was up to no good. The room has been filled with schematics and prototypes to create the ultimate bad day, the one, that would even give him an official holiday. Scheming and planning, planning and scheming, chuckling and laughing madly he was to perform the perfect storm of bad luck. But just as he was about to unleash his masterpiece, he received a status report that his Guinea Pig- the narrator meant 'target' did something very noble that made his karma jump exactly 0000000000,1 points above the punishing list and thus his butt was saved. Murphy sighed as his plan was as fast destroyed as if Doofenshmirtz himself crafted it. But then he remembered that there were other fools he could unleash his wrath on and so, he pulled out his 'Bad Karma' list and looked who was on the first place, or should the underpaid Narrator say, who are on the first place.
"Hmmm... Donald J. Trump, Recep Tayyip Erdoğan, and Kim Jong-un... why not triple the fun?"
And thus, the scheming evil named Murphy spend the next few hours refining his plans so that it could reach even higher hight or suffering, pain, and annoyance. No one was saved from Murphy, but not everyone would be on his target list. Fear Murphy and survive, but never mock him or become his special guest.
wow Erebus is a Humongous dick......Schninkelton Van Featherdam ...... those idiots
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I will miss you, pal. I hope you will receive many flowers.
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It seems like I once again did my job of writing right without causing a wave of malice and salt to crush me. Huzzah!
And thus, our happy Writer enjoyed the rest of them until he realized., that his Readers already hungered for another Chapter, and so, he was once again, a prisoner of his chair.
The End...
ps. Look through the comments of Chapter 24, you might find a few funny things down there
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What about reincarnation?
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Yep, I am pretty sure your Gravestone will be the only one people want to visit. But, hey, you only live once, at least that's what most people say, so I am more than happy that you are going to enjoy it
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Sorry ran out of black got to wait for the 1st to get more gel pens.
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Take all the time in the world, no need to rush. I think it's more important that my Readers (including you) have less stress than have more of it.
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Thanks you my friend.
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Ah, understood.
Roll credits. Ding!
I like to play a game.
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Really? Chess? Dinosaur land? Rising Sun? Memory? Aggravation? ... I don't know how to play most of them
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No! The show must go on!
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Read the new Description of Don't You Dare and your believes on omnipotence might change.
DoN't MeSs WiTh ThE cLoWn
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*chucling*
Yes... An omnipotent being can do everything a mortal could ever dream of, but what happens when TWO omnipotent being fight against another? My statement in a previous Chapter 'only another real god (omnipotent) beings and the corruption (add information of Don't You Dare's next chapter: interlude) who is a new level of omnipotent, the true meaning of omnipotent, can beat a god, but what can destroy or beat a 'true' omnipotent being? Let's just say, everything i say in my Chapters and comment has a meaning and the creators souls are so much more than you would have ever thought they are. Just await an different kind of Chapter that will expand Don't You Dares universe by lot with so few words.
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Just wait for the next Chapter and your questions may be answered. And like we said before, omnipotence just means that they can do EVERYTHING but EVERYTHING is viewed different from watcher to watcher. But, who decides what omnipotence is since we Humans have by far not learned everything and there so many un explained things out there
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Here's the hint. One piece is all mighty, but two broken pieces are only equal to another, but still seem just as powerful as the whole to those inferior and those who never saw the power's limit. Separated, they are never as powerful as the whole. The souls meaning is more than a crown for the worthy to wear, they are eternal, cannon be destroyed, even through a being that carves to end all. They are older the bearers and the one who seeks to end it all, the truth we seek shall soon revealed.
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Hmmm... This may have made my last few comments look a bit wrong, but it doesn't effect the grand scheme of Don't You Dare. I so want to spoil the next Chapter and the ending of Don't You Dare right now and win this argument, but on the other hand it would be too cruel to spoil it.
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You didn't lose completely. You are the first person on this site that was able to argumentate with me so long, the last record holder was I believe that Hamster guy after crushed him with like 5 or 6 of his own wrong insults directed at one of my readers. Just look through the comments of my second story. So you didn't lose completely as you stood your ground, very impressive.
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...
*urge to spoil rises...*
You know... You are making me wonder if I should my plans for Don't You Dares ending as you are always close to the plans i made, always scratching them and then make a 180 degree curve. as for Hamster... Dude... He is THE GUY on Fimfiction that complains about everything and without a doubt the most known and hated guy.
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You just need to look at new story and if one of the tags is human, there is a 80% chance that he's going to be there and a 100% if it involves Displaced. That guy is the worst to new writers with their stories and even ended dozens of users hopes to make stories with his insults and his literal followers who add more insults, like their comments, dislike tips and complements and even insults the ones who support the writer, dislike the story into oblivion, add theses Stories to groups like 'disgusting', 'trash', 'no original'. And here comes the cherry on the trash, he never even once wrote a story... That guy was already banned four times for a week each time and he is still there. I think it is funny that now sometimes writers with several thousand followers group up and destroy him and take apart his argument on certain Stories. Karma, I love it.
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Not for hamster. He usually just shouts insults once he was hit even once and his arguments at that point are more fitting if they were directed at him. For example : "Why do you waste so much time on this site, don't You have anything better to do?" said the guy who is online every single day . Or "jeeze, calm your tits, this is the internet so don't take it serious" said the guy who gets mad when people don't take him serious.
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Yup, he has been quiet since I send the admins enough information of his recent activities that he got banned for a week and the admins personally told him that one more report that then HE. IS. GONE. FROM. THIS. SITE
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He got destroyed when he said that on one Story. Schadenfreude, my kind of humor when it hits the worst people.
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Everything will be explained in Chapter 25, but here is a very blunt version. Sindrael infested Mathael with all of his remaining seeds of corruption. Mathael, a being who apparently is able to absorb it passively, saw and did a lot of bad things that created more and more of the seeds and they were concentrated in his heart, giving him a VERY hard time to feel anything like it truly is. For example, Cadence asked Mathael "Why is your heart so small?" the answer, it was slowly rotting away and there was little in him that made him. Just compare Mathael to a war veteran and you might find many similarities as why it is so hard for him to have a normal . Him wanting to be 'normal' and how little he actually felt from his surroundings also has been referenced several times
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Ops, sorry, I misunderstood what you asked. All your questions are going to be answered in Chapter 25 and no, Mathael isn't dead.
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Fun fact: Chapter 24 was supposedly to end with Mathael being filled with all Soul Traits, but due to an transfer error from my writing program to Fimfiction, it was erased.
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Looking new.
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Is this the finished version? Because I don't there is anything that could be done to make it look even better But, I do have a question. Is that a fingerless glove that Mathael is wearing, not that I mind it of course.
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I'm not finished but it just yet I still have to add two other colors to it but the fingerless glove is what his Cutie Mark is at.
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Good to know, I didn't want to add it without your permission as it technically is your property. But I do have another question, are Mathael's wings final with the white edges? Again, I think it looks nice, but a bit bright, maybe an itsy bit of gray? Still, this is your work so please don't change your plan because of my tips, okay? I don't have as much experience with art.
muchas peleas, es hora de diversión
And Mathael they say his heart grew three sizes that day
You sly dog you did a doctor seus
Welp, all of that doesn't freaking matter anyways, because this story still got cancelled.
At least the original Don't Get Cocky wasn't this depressing.
P.S. Was it necessary for Erebus to hurt "Mathael" like that!? That was BS.