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Is it wrong that I want to more of Mathael and darkness being together? Because it feels like he's ignoring her a little bit.
EPIC SOLO FIGHT!
and the rise of the army of darkness!
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Ignoring is not very fitting. I would rather call it, does not want her to get hurt and is very busy. Also, once the arc is over, I want to maybe make an arc with Darkness or at least an interlude. Also, Darkness will soon meet the Shadow Guard, again once this is over.
9030835
Yes, rise my armies! RISE AND CRUSH ALL MY FOES!!!
9030857
This dragon can't wait to see what happens in this mockery of a world! I am glad that some of the Caribou aren't like the rest, I just that there is enough of them that their race isn't going to go extinct.
-watching from the void.
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Not everyone is rotten, and no one should judge an entire race because of what one or many did. As for the extinction part... there are always way and means to accomplish a goal...
9030878
Especially with the powers of the prototype virus or he could make another artifact like he did for that matriarchal world. I am happy about that and I understand that Mathael wouldn't wish that on all but the corruption. I am also curious to see his reaction to meeting a certain someone on this world, also I hope that he would be able to cleanse the fallen ones of the corruption.
-watching from the void.
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Mathaels power does not come from sheer strength or agility. His strength lies in the fact that he has so many possibilities to attack. It's almost impossible to fight him as he has so many attacks that you can't outsmart him. The certain someone will remain secret till probably very early in Chapter 21. As for the corruption part, The changed Crytslall artifact that has been corrupted does play a small role in some of the caribous, but the reason for their corruption is because of two reasons. One is secret for now and the other is that they have been thought like this from their birth to their death and while it would be good for Mathael to change them to good, Mathael despises slavery or forcing someone into something he isn't with his power even if it's changing someone's mind into good.
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I wasn't talking about mind altering or anything like that, I was talking about genderswapping if there aren't enough good males around.
and I am looking forward to it!
-watching from the void.
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... Genderswapping... Hmmm...
*evil thought intensify*
*Chuckling*
Killing+ reviving+ gender swap = eternally in debt + repopulation of the Caribou + new and good culture led and a golden age for the Caribou started by Mathael = happy end for everyone and hopefully no one will pray to Mathael = more Stories to tell his Children and grandchildren and more stuff to writing for Reader= Bleeding fingers because of too much writing
...
I think I miscalculated somewhere...
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hehe, well, that is one way for this to end, and it would help bring catharsis for both the equestrians and the female caribou.
and you miss calculated at the bleeding fingers.
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Phew! Now I only need to decline the order of 723 packages of bandages and think of a way of somehow writing this.
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Good Luck! I am glad to provide ideas!
may the void always welcome you with peace.
*HUGS*
-watching from the void.
That song was creepy as fuck i'm getting shivers just thinking about it
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oh? I prefer to sing the female one !
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*Return Hug*
I wish you a good evening
9030935
It was supposed to be really scary and I didn't use the female version on purpose.
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YUS!
*WARM SNUGGLES!*
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I think I'm gonna get nightmares DX
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*TACKLE HUGS!*
nope! not with this crowd you aren't!
.... please ignore the tail....
Great chapter, and I can't wait to see those fucking Caribou get what they deserve
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*In Dainns office*
*Sipping Coffee*
*Rumbling*
*looks out the window and see thousands of Shadow warriors plus a few millions zerg, terran and protoss units.*
*Takes another sip of coffee*
"Welp...! I'm fucked!"
*Takes another sip of coffee*
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*pokes the tail with a fufflepuff shape toy stick*
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nu!
my tail is my tail only.
*Snuggling increases*
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Also, I've got to make use of that hide and seek song now that you've introduced it to me (Don't know when, but I just have to use it at some point), I even have a perfect idea for it. Just imagine it, the child of a half demon, kidnapped with his fathers love and her own daughter, and then the child tells their captor about his fathers demonic side that even the father isn't aware of until then. And as the captor begins to sweat in concern, the song starts plays shortly before one of his men crashes through the wall mutilated, his chest torn open as his ribs face outward like grasping claws, his organs having been torn from the body with a few now scattered around the floor. The only thing still in the mans chest being his still beating heart as he looks up to his boss in absolute terror and says in a ding whisper, "Run". And to finally get the captor into gear he begins hearing the screams of agony ring from his compound, all while the song is still sung above the screams, seemingly being carried upon the wind itself.
What do you think?
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And I thought I was evil, but you sir or madam, you are malicious.
*Lifts Tophat*
*Put Tophat back on*
Auf Wiedersehen der Herr/ Die Frau, Ich bin dann mal weg.
okay nice but i think you need to fix it i think see for your salf?
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which part exactly? 25k words are a bit hard to just look for one specific error.
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more like a feud
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malicious? Evil? Why sir, flattery will get you nowhere fast. Also, I am a sir, one who has a probably unhealthy fascination with torture and gore.
9031052
Don't you mean 'A few?' As far as I know, I don't have a long-standing mutual hostility against you.
9031061
Everyone has an unnatural fascination with certain things. Yours are mustaches, blood, and gore while mine are top hats, walking canes, karma and Murphys law.
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Mustaches? How did you know I have a mustache, 'cause I didn't say anything about one (and I don't have an unnatural fascination with them, I just think that they look cool ).
9031082
hahahahahahahahahahahahaha
9031097
Well... mustaches are cool, I give you that, they add a bit of class.
9030935
You think it's scary as is? Put it at .75 playback speed.
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*a gunshot was heard in a nearby room and a loud THUD sound was also heard*
9031147
dear god! I didn't know I was able to out-creep myself this much!
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*The sound of looting could be heard in a nearby room*
This was the best and creepiest chapture I'VE ever read. Nice job with the music, where did u find it. And satamai is the BEST and FUNNIEST anime to ever exist.
Also, ur the funniest person I know (besides the people who made those funny comments)
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I once read a fanfiction about a really overpowered pervert... yes the main Character called himself like that. In one chapter he used the music hide and seek, but in a normal female version so I searched for something creepier on youtube and tada! 15 minutes later I found it. I think I know what music I will use next Halloween...
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Also, I am happy that you like it , but I sadly earned my 40th dislike... man, people have high standards these days for Free Entertainment!
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*then the creepy music from the chapter plays*
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*Fast Footsteps could be heard and someone kicking in a door before driving away with a car*
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i would laugh if that happened. great chapter and love his Shadow Guards, can't wait to see more of them. Talespinner, i salute you
I really liked this chapter because I finally get to see the caribou get rekhed by mathael and also see our protagonist build an army of darkness. The shadow guards, I would be expecting to be very interesting characters in the next part of this arc. I really like this story and is one of my favorite stories hands down and even through Don’t get Cocky is gone (kinda) this story is a worthy replacement.
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I thank you my dear Reader and these 5 warriors and maybe a 6th and 7th will play more of a role in the story than just for war. I am planning on maybe making interludes for them or their private life. So many possibilities and challenges for them to truly reach their potential Squaaek!!* I am sooo excited!
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I am flattered And I am planning on adding more story to them. I originally planned the Shadow Guards to be 20 elite warriors who had only slight personality and were more of a special commando than loveable character, but I decided against it and made 5 of them. Also, thanks to you that you see that my story is worthy of calling it a 'replacement' although I rather call it a way to 'not let Nosferus legacy be forgotten. '