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FIRST!!
Good read 10/10
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Actually my proofreader and about 60 admins read it before you.
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Lol I count my self as 64th then . Good proof reader
64th view! Boohywah
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I see what you just did their bloodborne reference.
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I knew I put one of those somewhere, but forgot later if I did it or just let it in my notes.
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BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!, SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE!, MILK FOR THE KHORNE FLAKES!
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Ok, you seriously got me with the last one!
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Lol did u forget one my edits and put ur comment in their
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I am not sure. Can you perhaps tell me which part you mean exactly? 36k words is pretty long
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I can’t rember you making blood born reference . But I remover u typing “Blood born reference” I might be confusing myself .
Also I definitely need to make a mock up of all your characters I forgot few of them when I was reading. took me min to remember
Also welcome to the 400k word count club . A club I made in my documents only good story’s that are over 400k are in it
👏👏👏👏👏
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Yay!!!!!!!
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Thank you!
Well, Discord received an epic beatdown. Will wait patiently for more.
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Thanks, I tried to mix a bit of the narrator from Dungeons into Don't You Dare's narrator.
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Okay, we'll see us in like four or five months again.
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Discord stated that it was a secret finale, as in, that happened after the show ended. It never really happened, nor was it ever planned.
Definitely worth the wait! 👍 I approve this chapter. Now the answers will come next. The Embodiment of Hatred was perfectly timed and well executed with the internal struggles. Trust me when I say few people can master this while keeping a long battle scene flowing nicely.
My comment is over.
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Awww, thanks the reason behind the success is simple. The Embodiment of Hatred has been sitting in my notes since the Griffon tounrnament, and has steadily evolved between chapters. While the attacks and powers have been brought to my thoughts and the chapter at the same time, the animalistic character was the thing that I worked hardest on. Most of the time I just had to think of an enraged animal, and a man seeing red, which was actually quiet entertaining to write, I also think it made the character seem more alive. Kind of funny thinking about it. But let me tell you one thing. Everything I put in these chapters has a purpose, and the Embodiment of Hatred as well as the eye of kroggar will be important in the future.
I hope you'll enjoy the future chapters aswell as this one, as I was finaly able to beat my fear of writting a really bad event into the story
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HAPPY B-DAY TO ME
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Happy birthday.
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Thx you my friend.
While the song chosen is excellent for such a slow moving and world ending attack...I honestly think Komm Süsser Tod (End of Evangelion) wouldve been more appropriate for a floating ball of death and extinction. It also would fit his emotions a bit considering what he did to darkness by accident and what hes become...
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I agree, it does sound much more appropriate for the situation. Also, thanks for reminding me of the existence of evangelion, I must rewatch that in the future again.
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Eh,I'm mostly waiting for 4.44.
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You should make Mathael fake being evil to show his creation the danger of what will happen if he becomes evil also to teach them a lesson for not being there to help him.
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Dully noted...
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In the words of the prequels: "There is always a bigger fish."
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Indeed, that's what the description of the story says, if one reads between the lines, like in real life.
That guy look like he can take in the brother moon from dead space
Why doesn't "Mathy" just go to the ben 10 universe get the "trans-alien changing speacies watch" go to the place where the Omni potent alien race called X alien and become practacly a deity once he gets the scan.(He modifys it of course,) than Walla ya got yourself deity status. The only thing that would happen is getting two extra entity's in "Mathy's" head. The reason why is the entites job to keep in track of his actions, because all of Xalien-kind has those in their head and it's the one of the other reasons besides others why some of them did not do something "unethical".
Edit:"Just a suggestion from your everyday friendly anonymous AngelCat. It's a idea to consider Zwillingen700 besides I am sure you would do 'research' on the x-alien race from Ben 10 and use the "entity's" I am talking about in the comment to bring more conflict to the story with "Mathy/op protagonist" After all their might be disagreement of what's ethical to their definition and "Mathy's" in his mission to stop the "corrupted" .."
Counts of likes to dislikes in percentage, but this obviously excludes those who didn't bother liking or disliking as in they did not vote.
336likes+62dislikes=398 than (398/100) than 336/3.98= about84.42% liked this
9623302 May ya please read the comment two comments ago that I posted it's an idea you could use, although you of course don't have to take it, but if ya want "mathy" to be as Op as possible ya can take it mate :)
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While I agree that would be a good way to become stronger, but you Shouldn't underestimate the corruption. Some of them are really powerful, why else do you think that he can't just travel back in time to safe his parents? Simple, because Sindrael even without a host and severely weaked would not allow that to happen.
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I appreciate every comment I get and I will soon start to plan the next interdimensional trolling spree. All idea are welcome
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Interesting mate, so it's like a big powerful entity timeline preventor.... guess this is more op entity than I thought. Though question I remember a story arc in don't get cocky where the protagonist went to the Naruto universe will "mathy" go their like in the original story or not?
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That's awesome! Here's an idea it's one of those alternative universe but on your universe, but instead the villian is an evil version "mathy" married to the evil tyrant princesses.
However prince blue blood and other nobles included captain shining armour plus cadance are trying to do as much good as they(good version of this captain and blueblood, but kinda think of them as tragic heros because they don't have the ability to do much good in the world) can in a world where the entire world is owned by the (evil version of princesses and mathy).
The races are suppressed and those who oppose gets mind controlled into serving the princesses to do anything. Like spying, infiltrating, etc.
The good noble rebels tried but failed in getting the world back in its place to what they dream of. Not sure if it's a great idea though it's probably not that great.
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Nope. I have far too little knowledge about Naruto, and I don't want this story to be deleted due to too little mlp.
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Very interesting idea, I'll keep that in mind once Mathael has reached the end of the Don't Get Cocky timeline, excluding the naruto arc.
More please f mo
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I'll try my best
I feel like this song fits a little better. In my opinion.
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I added the song, but I added it at a later point of the fight instead of replacing the first song.
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After looking through the chapter again I found it. Still a great song that matches up with this chapter perfectly.
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I agree, and I appreciate every help that supports me in making Don't You Dare as good as I can possibly make it.