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This is awesome!
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I thank you for your possitve comment my dear reader
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nuuuuuu
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Don't be too sad about it my dear reader. Maybe next chapter you'll be the first comment, but only a admin can become the first viewer... You have no idea how confused I was back then when I read 8 views on an unpublished chapter.
Did this give you a better mood?
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thank you
MMMOOORREEEEE!!!! BEFORE I SICK YUNO GASAI ON YOUR ASS!!
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Oh please, don't THAT guy... Besides, you never commented on anything, the story, etc and saying 'First comment' does not count. D=
Niice extension on the various being on squid, shows that you branching out and making this story truly your own
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Thank you. This is only the beginning of the original Chapters. Of course some future event will happen like in Don't Get cockey, more or less, but it always will keep some originality.
With less I mean
-no marvel
-no naruto world
-maybe the flim flam brothers? but different
With more i mean
- a more dense story
-the backstory of why things are the way they are
- a few visits/ interdimensional trolling spree
- adding more story to the dark masters past and an explanation of why this is his backstory
And much more. I have planned a lot for Don't You Dare
Maybe the pink shutter too... Too much information?
good job can't wait for the next one.
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Any plans for trolling with Zelretch from type moon?
I much enjoyed this.
I can't wait for more.
It's also to bad the blood got in my drink dut it was free foods and drinks for any one who got a splash zone seat so yay.
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And your spoiling us, keep it up and i'm gonna have to look in to a bench warmer seat or a box seat.
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Maybe a little I'm not sure
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I never watched type moon, so no
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Come here, come all. We are giving away all spash zone tickets for free. You don't want to miss it, only 9,7 million tickets are left.
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Mahhahahaha
You are wonderful.
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Fate stay night is in the same universe of type moon.
HO! And good chapter, keep going
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1. There will be no Naruto arc
2. I'll think about it
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Ohh...
Thanks for your positive comment
Good chapter. Mathael is a cool character.
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Thanks. Although he is... How should I put it... probably the most op protagonist on this site!!!. He is no gary sue. He is, if you have noticed, a very flexible character. He can be professional in armor or in suit, be a badass, be the most scary being, is smart and yet goofy or funny, but most importantly, he has a heart. All in all it took me several month of forming the character, but hey many like him even though I sometimes have to think for a while like should he be nice or a jerk (you know to who), badass or you worst nightmare I still have fun.
Spoiler for the next chapter A lot of story important information will be told and a noble will try something very stupid. Be hyped
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That's what makes the character so cool. He can be a badass but also a goofy man. He can cold hearted but also the sweetest man. That is the problem with some story characters. They aren't as you say. Flexible. They are stiff, ridged and bland sometimes. But anyways. I can not wait to read more of this story. See ya in the next chapter pal.
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And I hope to see you next time on Don't You Dare. Bye-bye
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Bye~
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I do have an Editor, but he just has a hard time at the moment and can't edit right now. Just read the full description and you'll know who.
I'm moving on. No this just to much of That story.
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Farewell my former reader.
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his does not have enough chillness to handle this story
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Well not everyone likes super op human turned into something different and displaced in Equestria. I do love that btw and you probably too, but I guess that he is more of a slice of life fan. Well I can't make everyone happy
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*pukes at thinking slice of life in a bucket* i prefer bloodshed and war thank you very much
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I have very good plans about war and bloodshed, but that sure will take a few month till this story will reach the really good parts.
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i agree with you
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I miss having an editor...
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I'd like a ticket pls~
Why don't you get yourself an editor?
There is quite a few misspellings in these chapters.
Like to-two and of-off
a mi no me engañan las princesas quieren rabo