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this is I how found this chapter
1: wakeup
2: got coffee
3: start reading
4: got to the middle
5: laughed for hours on end
And yes it is to my liking thank you for the mention sensei have a good day
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There's no need to thank, but I will enjoy the day and hopefuly you'll do the same
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Did you know? You are on the front page of fimfiction?
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Yes, Every time I upload a new Chapter you can see my story under new update. You got my hopes up btw, I thought for second that my story got featured at the top of the site.
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Sorry bout that.
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No need to be sorry about it, but you didn't lie, everyone could see my story on the front page.
Much better than the splash zone.
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sometimes, tears are more worth than blood....... But Tears and Blood are better.
OOOOOOHHHHHHHHH SSSSSSHHHHHHIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTT QUICK ZWILL INTO THE "IN CASE OF MATHAEL RAGE" BUNKER!!!
You mean like this .
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Yep. Thanks now I can put in the gift for Chapter 12
rofl on what u did with blueballs i also think that he should of asked to change the so called prince's name to blueballs and made it law that every one had to use that name and i agree wait till flurry heart is born the adorable must be born rofl and one she grows up make her a rebellious little girl for some reason it fits with what i see her becoming with an asshole like shining as a father and a mom like cadence
Two ideas
1. Can you talk to the writer of Don't Underestimate Me and see if he would do a crossover with you?
2. Have Mathael visit the Don't Get Cocky universe, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Pinky pie voice: no dummy. Maud pie voice: there is escape from Mathaels wrath, prepare for extermination.
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And I thought letting him 'disapear' mysteriously after her birth woul be better. Already planning ahead? I'm starting to think that my readers are planning more on Don't You Dare than me...
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rofl you would be surprised on what people can come up with but i was thinking yes make him disappear but let it lag a little bit so she can see just how shit shining is maybe 3rd or 4th bday cause i can just see him being a shit husband to cadence he just looks like a abusive guy after they tied the knot and can be found him cheating on her. Then she could up and wish for it to happen then ether a portal opens under her dad as he is in the room where her bday is taking him or as she goes to sleep shining shit could just vanish the next morning i gave the don't get cocky guy some ideas to go off of but the story got cut before a lot of them could be put in effect
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1. I'll see what I can do there, but heres a spoiler: I'm already planning a crossover with someone else for the next Chapter
2. Well Asura did say that not even a god could enter his world, but what about the mega god of death? I'll see about that too.
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Well the writer did die sadly. Ohh if cadence doesn't even want him then this will be fun. I see what Ican do.
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HE...HE..HE i always find thinking kind of demented things can bring interesting ideas and giving multiple paths it can go no one can say which way it will go and for all anyone knows it could go completely different way i look forward to giving more ideas later
Taelonso Grim will be watching
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done
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Hahaha. It is. Good work pal.
I just imagine the guards he have saved are like "nope, count me out! I dont want to die!!!"
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Yeah, I'm pretty sure that if Celestia wouldn't have give them a day off then they would have probably screamed this during the punishment ."ARE YOU COMPLETELY NUTS!!!!! RUN FOR YOU LIFES YOU IDIOTS!!!!"
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lol
Heheheh. I have a Poem for Blueballs.
Roses are red,
Violets are blue.
Omae Wa Mou Shindeiru.
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Good. There are a lot of insiders in the story, but some are even from other stories. So I doubt anyone will ever find them all. But still Good luck
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It would be great if you make flurry heart strong like 'have decimate a army at 10 year-old'
When you lost to a 10 year-old girl, that really destroy your pride
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She is only powerful in magic which can't harm him, but yes. That would destroy anyones pride.
Lost against flurry heart achievement -100 manliness points.
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The civilized way to destroy someone. Please add the meme with the screaming guys who scream ohhhhhhh!!! with top hats and monocles please
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exactly that my rdear reader, exactly that
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Hehehehe. Glad you like it.
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This is the smallest spoiler I have ever give, but hey. See it as a late reward for you comment. The next chapter is already at 10k words and is Original.
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Wonderful. Hey. Have you thought about adding OC's. Not like Mathael but like guards or friends of Mathael to help protect the land from the Demons
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you mean monsters right? Since he is technically a demon... and my plans for the demons are not that all of them are evil, but- I am spoilering too much again... I haven't actually thought about that idea yet, I'll see if I can implement it or not, but I am not making promises
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Well if you do. Just give contact me here and I can give you one Demon that is good. If not then that's ok by me. I'll still read.
I guess you mean the word your and not you
*reads chapter and gets to shining armours' 'famous last moment'* NANI?! *eye twitches, joker grin (think lesson zero twi), pulls a sythe from the void.* omae wa mou shindeiru.... *swings sythe, screaming can be heard.*
Give him Matheal's head, and ask him if he's happy
me encanta esta historia y casi me la pierdo
In addition to what is going to be said, he also saved the mane 6, so, if they weren't there he would, also, I'd like to see him fight Tirek, or the storm king or something
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Only 100?
Creative, cruel(to Blueblood), and badass. Impressive
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Thank you!
While I do enjoy this story, I do have a problem with the misandry.
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The story takes place on a simular world like the one of the fanfiction Don't Get Cocky, the social standarts were therefore already chose by the writer of the other story as Don't You Dare's original purpose was and still is to honor Nosferatu's work. I am sorry if this displeases you in any way, shape or form, and I can't promise you that the misandry will get better or worse. I can only warn you about chapters 20-22 as they are a bit 'darker' regarding the misandry.
Still, I am happy that you shared you opinion about this story and would like to hear you opinion of future chapters aswell.
I am enjoying this story so far, but I think you are making the princesses a little to pathetic, they are just figure heads with apparently no physical power and almost non political power. I mean not even the royal guard respect them. We’re they not goddesses, why is everyone pushing them around.
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Well the princesses AREN’T goddesses and never were Alicorns are just another race on the world of Equis. Granted a powerful one but still a race. And everyone isn’t pushing them around they are hiding their bad actions and tricking them..... not only that but the disrespect is easily shown as a way to show how horribly out of hand their guards have gotten.
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Well, have you ever considered that nobility use the princesses as an image? I mean, just because they can move sun and moon, doesn't say that they are goddesses, they are just seen as that. A god that can only create is not instantly praised or followed, knowing their strengths and weaknesses can lead them to be just used like an animal. Most citizens act differently 'in favor' of the princesses. I don't want to bring religion into this, but I don't think God would've liked the holy crusade, or a certain terror organization that acts 'in the name of their god.' Or am I wrong?
Because he's Jesu-I mean the protagonist