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Looks good I’ll put the new version in the my docs. And combine with the rest in IBooks
Merry Christmas every one !!
Great chapter. Sure it took a while but it was worth it . Hope to see the next chapter soon.
p.s, feel bad for discord when he's against an anger matheal.
p.s.s, rip discord
uh oh Discord is dead
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Thanks, I'll try to release the chapters as often as I can with as much quality I can put into them.
No one makes Mathael speak out of his heart and then just do this:
Mathael said."And that's my live story. So, what's your opinion?"
Discord not listening
Mathael shouted angrily."ARE YOU EVEN LISTENING!?!?!?"
Discord stares at Mathael with and risen eyebrow before moving his eagle claw to his ears and pulling out a ear bud. Discord asked with a smug smile." Sorry, I wasn't listening. Did you say anything?"
Mathael stared at Discord with an dumbfounded look on his face and said."You done goofed."
Rip Discord.
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Hey?!?! Who want to play Dr Frankenstein with 877656598731225775234800099622247 pieces?
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?
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Let's say Mathael is going to rip apart into billions of pieces, the game would be to put them back together. Frankenstein was a doctor who put many different part together to make one creature.
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so he would make a new chao spirit
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A better one, so to say. Mathael isn't Ash or Asura, everyone has a reason and who is Mathael to judge others for their deeds? I mean Mathael, even if he wasn't in control, did a lot more and more gruesome things than Discord.
Ps. This and the last message did only contain tiny spoilers and will not happen the way the comments were written.
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... You know... This is one of the hardest questions I was ever asked by an reader...
"I take the gun."
*takes the gun*
*Whoop Whoop Whoop*
*Zwillingen700 escaped*
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i just want to get something to eat and fund a jar of homemade plum jam
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*reverse Whoop Whoop Whoop*
*gives all the plums*
*Whoop Whoop Whoop*
*didn't die of cuteness*
GREAT!
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I love it so hard right now. I am so pumped right now so pumped!!!
Beyond pissed off Mathael's Music.
boi
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Omg lol when I was editing and I came across that part with mare asking for help for her plum farm I don’t know y but it made me laugh cause your the first person to ever mention a plum farm in eques .
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Yeah, I realized that the first Chapters lacked a lot of Quality and I think I'll rewrite them one day because of obvious reasons. But most errors you mentioned are mostly dealt with in later Chapters like in Chapter 25 for example.
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I thank you for taking the time to comment and say your critic. While I must agree that this story does seem a bit like wish fullfilment because the story was/is inspired by such an story and since I was really bad at writing at first and was writing on a Ps4, I was not really good at making a good story. But I promise that the further you read the Chapter, the reading experience only becomes better, except maybe the most recent arc. As for Mathael being Op, he is no gary sue, he looks like that at the moment, but he really isn't. I again thank your for stating your opinion on this story and I hope you'll consider reading my other story as well.
Yours sincerely,
Zwillingen700
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I haven’t edited the newer chapters yet
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As he said he will edit them later. I’m will also go every little detail for him and give him a edited version so he may make the changes
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Lol yeah the editor for that one spent all day going over it.
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Got removed I still have the one where it went past Naruto arch
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He/she meant the error that I wrote the 'I' only this 'i' way. And yes, I think there would be many more errors without your help.
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Ehm... I can't see your picture...
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How about now?
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You never fail to amaze me. You should consider putting your pictures on Deviantart so everyone can see your work, and on this way, the images wouldn't just vanish after a few days, like what happened to the one in the blog posts. Or I could put them on my DeviantArt account and state that it was you who made them.
Besides that, it's a lovely picture, and I could imagine adding this into a chapter. Thanks for taking the time to make these images.
Yours thankful,
Zwillingen700
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You can put it on your deviantART I don't mind do you have a Discord account cuz? I do not mind sending you pictures through that.
Me: *points at discord*
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Omg u did put “i” instead of “I” I got so sick of highlighting them lol
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In a Darth Sidious voice yes let the hate flow through you.
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Hate? Boy, I need something much stronger than just that to write the battle against Discord.
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Do we need to call Kratos?
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Nah, he isn't the same rage-a-lot since he got a boi, still badass, but not on the same dropkicking an lava giant down off mount olympus level of badass.
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So 100% Beyond livid or maybe we are talking about Universal destruction livid because what he has done to his girls. I wouldn't be shocked if he go 100% power.
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I planned something a lot darker and believe me when I say dark considering what I planned. Discord will overstep boundries beyond of what happened in Don't Get Cocky.
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What you got it sounding like Discord is completely fuck right in the Down Under.
jeice is Discord
In
Vegeta is Mathael
Ketos will return. Won't he?
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Who knows... Who knows.., Well, I most certainly do, but answering your quest is an act I shall not do.
Ps. Merry Christmas or whenever your country celebrates this holiday.
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Merry christmas to you as well!
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merry Christmas everybody enjoy your holiday
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... Have you ever considered writing a fanfiction?...
Ketos. Brilliant.
Percentage of the story in 12/28/2018
302 likes and 56dislikes
302+56=358 then 358/100=3.58
302/3.58=84.357...
84.357% of people like this story so far.
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Not bad, but you forget one crucial number. The number of people who read the chapters. I have about 1k readers that slowly catch up with the newest chapters. I don't know what's so hard in clicking one time to either say "I like it" or "I don't like it" after taking the time to read about 375k words.
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Can't take into that account, because of the fact that they haven't voiced their opinion.Though I do see your point.
how long would it take to read this on average?
well there are 374,048 words in this story on 12/28/2018
and it takes an average of 200 to 250 words per minute to read for a person. Than 374,048/200=1870.24 minutes or 31 hours, 10 minutes and 14 seconds roughly, but 374,048/250=1496.192 minutes or 24 hours, 56 minutes, 11 seconds.
Though most are going up in reading if you're a successful college student you should be able to read
300 words per minute, which means 374,048/300=1246.82666667 minutes or 20 hours 46 minutes, 49 seconds.
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I looked at a website that apparently just exist to convert words to minutes and it came out it would take 2877,3 minutes to read Don't You Dare (at least for the average person) or about 47,955 hours which equals to 1 day and 23,995 hours or just two days.