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wow, thanks for mentioning me. also nurse redheart introduced mathael as asura, fyi
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There is another one
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Her name is ... 'said with a straight face ' jack the ripper
Narrator it could be worse.
O_O You almost got me with the part one and two my heart dropped.
When this is finished I will probably read it every time I see it in my library.
Awsomely cool more plz.
you missed a lot of Asura names
Asura is here to make cures for the diseases.
While Asura was shaking the king's hand, what he said next shocked the rest.
Asura used"Conqueror Haki"
Dainn was in shock that his mind control spell didn't work on Asura.
Asura said, "The males are superior to female in every way!"
This did made Asura frown as he already knew that the females wouldn’t
Asura relaxed when they accepted his offer and was about to leave when one of the doe ask
There was a lot of times when he's referred to as asura in the deer kingdom bit
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Well... Maybe 10 hours straight writing was a bit extreme...
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you think
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Yeah. I was already getting tired when I started the deer kingdom part in my 10 hours writing session. Even with making two 1 hour breaks
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No problem and thanks for showing me one my errors.
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When I saw the picture for the first time I though 'is she just trying to look edgy and badass or not'
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*Cracking knuckles in appreciation* lets get get read to write!!!
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...No...?
Dramatic Spacing
You can have mathael train Darkness so she has more skill set than just have powerful armor and weapon. Its kinda useless when the user is unfamiliar with the equipment and low skill.
ME: *PUTS DUCK TAPE ON HIS MOUTH* STFU BEFORE I GRAB THE CHAINSAW AND YOU CAN SAY GOODBYE TO MR.JUNIOR!!!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k090fjqa04I
this would be a good song to play during battle
it fills me with murderous intent
so much rofl and way to go condensing 2 chapters into one and i can guess meeting the princess is next and all that most likely a assassination attempt which will fail oh so badly and point out the culprit *cough* shining *cough* sorry got something in my throat and run in with blueballs................ yes i said it seriously that shit stain would have assault a mare to bed her and maybe he has slaves of his own knowing that he looks down on all not a unicorn noble theirs a hint to look into
R.I.P
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Well she was created of ten thousand child's who were not allowed to be born so she pretty much lack of common sense and morality, so she not trying.
As a child that was never loved, she was strongly seeking out for love. Regardless of whatever the Master is male or female, she will probably demand his/her love as a "mother"
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Hmmm... I think I already have an Idea for the Training.
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Done.
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A secret slave Ring in Canterlot Castle !?!? ohh wait, we are talking about blue blood... If that would happen than he's most likely in chargen and then he would be a stain there, and a stain over there and a big splat two mountains to the right.
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That's sad. Let's hope that she'll one day find love in any way.
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And with these 'convincing' words, the Narrator decided to be a better team player... Or at least till he escapes one day...
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Well it will be a little funny if Mathael become her mother
I just see Mathael trying to explain to call him father but she continue to call him mother
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I was thinking that his mansion in canterlot like for when he is away from the castle and out of celestia's eye or a location in the city where the princesses wouldn't think to look
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Mathael goes one step backwards. Mathael goes another step backwards. Mathael turn around and runs. Mathael snappes his finger and created a Mother for her. The End.
*sniff*
Much better love story than Twilight.
Twilight: what about me and why are you crying?"
I'm not crying and now go!!!
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And is a that moment that Mathael turn around and see jack behind him
Jack: why did you run away?
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Who is Marhael ?
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God dammit
I think you have the MC character mixed up, Unless Asura just randomly showed up.
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Yeah... I think I'll fix that later today or tomorrow. I am Tired from walking like 5 hours with just a few breaks from walking.
After reading this another time I don't get is how Shining Armor shield held against 5 dragon hits but Darkness plasma shield broke after one hit. "a plasma shield that was as strong as the Shields of two immortals combined" its ether Shining Armor shield is super strong or the immortals shields is really weak.
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Well it's hard to compare science fiction with magic. Also I think that It's clear that some magical beings have a much stronger fire power than for example a siege tank.
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lol
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i would have to agree
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?
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In short. My class visited something called Berufsinfo markt (job information center) this event was on the other side of Northeim. It's a 45 walk the hill side up. Then we had about two hours time to visit stalls were they woul show some jobs and there was little time to just sit and relax. Afterwards we had to go to school again for two lessons and I had cooking so I had to stand around and cook.
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i see
Can't wait for the next chapter
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A little hint. It's already at 10.2k. Thank for the favorite, but it's weird when you don't 'like' it.
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hey I like the story so far it's just that one who's going to get more girlfriends and actually do something with them
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That's something I haven't decided yet and I just thought you forgot to like, every time publish a new chapter the notification tells me that 3-5 people put the story under favorite and track, but not like or dislike which is kinda weird if 1.7k people read it or rather 720 per chapter which makes me wonder one thing... Did 2/3 forgot what the like button is? Not that like and dislikes would change the speed i publish them, but it makes me wonder, is my story just 'meh' for so many or are they just trying to be nice. Who knows.
Great, they already renamed the country into is name
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Well... that escalated quickly... The writer is too powerful to let such an error exist in this story. Begone 'Mathaeland' and become 'Mathael and'
No sé si quiero leer esas otras historias
sorry i cant hear you what did yiu say