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under normal circumstances, no. When you're the god of mega death, yes
hopefully they don't end up with missing body parts before being rescued this time
I love the story but the 4 wall breaking has got to stop or atleast be toned down its getting annoying really
8834479
Thanks for the comment and I did more Narrato/Writer parts because a reader asked for it.
8834085
WHEN ARE WE GONNA SEE MORE OF UNDERTALE POWERS!!!
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son of a bitch! I CAN'T READ GASTER!!
*EDIT FOUND OUT HOW*
"THE NEXT CHAPTER WILL INVOLVE A LOT OF FIGHTING. SO NO NEED TO FEAR MY FRIEND FOR I AM THE MAN WHO WRITES IN HANDS"
8835208
I almost died from laughing
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if you think your gonna die from laughter then watch this
at the first joke
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My face!!! It hurts!!! I can't stop smiling!!!
In Mathael and Darkness's mind they are like "WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT SUPPOSED TO MEAN, B*TCH?!"
after making the pool bath the image u used for her is boken
(just think her with Darknesses hair)
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i can't get it to work
rofl i like the slips in the script then tries to quickly get back and i see no harm in using some parts of don't get cocky it could be a universe that shares a lot with it and yet he didn't follow the harem thing yet (with a character like him the ladies flock to them like a fat kid to cake.........pinkie put down that 3 tier cake it isn't second snack time) so yeah tho i can see a few more things it might share like the griffin blood bath tournament then kill the caribou king for his slavery of all females to prevent a fall of equestria from happening and maybe get the changeling on equestrias side after healing the queens daughter and jailing the ones who did it or maybe gelding them i remember a mention of it when he met darky's friends that is all i can think of right now
8836155
It should work now. Thanks for the tip
8836756
no prob always looking out to help so all your readers can enjoy the story-stories done tho if u see me doing a odd rant that is my mind having a break lol so i you see one long ass comment by me look to it in comedy and maybe some thing to take from it like possible ways to go kind of did that on the don't get cocky before an ass of a reader made the author give up from the complaining and i tried to stop it.............crazy people have good ideas if willing to listen just a heads up on that also my grammar sucks and i know it so no need 2 point it out
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I always listen to my readers and if they have a idea to improve Don't You Dare then they just have to comment their idea, much like a reader suggested the appearance of Moonlight or rather he or she commented that Mathael should not kill Nightmare Moon. I don't judge people by their grammar since Don't You Dare would be the living Nightmare of every English teacher without Google Docs
8836941
rofl cool you wouldn't believe how many of those grammar teachers read don't get cocky i was bashing my head on my wall enough to make a hole in it then got fed up and just said 2 them to just shut up i do what i want lol
8837013
*gives you the medal for the second place of having a head as stong as a block head*
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Roflmao
So 1st order of business are you sure
2nd order of business I like how you are actually Pointing out when you got things from Don't Get Cocky and add more context to it other then it just happened after this so where at in the timeline and you actually set up a cause and effect situation. Overall good work and good luck your awsome and an inspiration Zwillingen700-Creator of an OP but still mortal character.
✌☹💧⚐ ✡✌✡ 💣⚐☼☜ ✞✋⚐☹☜☠👍☜📬
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thank you for the nice comment. Of course Matahels Pancake don't contain any signs of Starlight Glimmer (Furiously looks at his right and left side). Also yes Mathael is overpowered, but he's not mortal. He is Imortal, but not unkillable. But here is the real Question, would Death be able to keep him in his realm or would he simply rip open the gate between the gate of the realm of the living and death with his bare hands.
This and much more will you get to read in the next chapter. Will Mathael die? Will blood be shed?(Yes it will) and will the Narrator beat any competitor to a bloody mess? read next time to find out
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*Evil Laugh* wonderful I can't wait to buy a splash zone ticket, also by mortal I ment human but since he is no longer human I didn't know how to put it. Splash zone, splash zone, splash zone, splash zone.
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Wow... That's evil, even for my Malicious standarts... I mean the standarts of your everyday writter (furiusly looks left and right. Also chuckles nervously)
That ending just no you don't leave something like that!
hi do the character of the story need help fight his enemy's you no what i mean
8841260
He didn't reveal his identity yet because he wants to see how canterlots inhibitions are to 'commoners' or rather to 'different species' when he will visits the city and not a bunch of people who are suddenly nice around him
8841461
no i am taking a bullet him getting help to fight the undead and monster
8841539
The monsters are a problem for this world, but I think that Mathael may or may not help a few being to become heroes
8841873
what do you mean
8842302
*sigh* can you tell me what you wanted again? I am German and although I am not bad at english I have no idea what exactly you want to tell me. So please, one more time for dummies. Ok?
8842344
never mind so are you continue the story?
8842379
I don't think I will stop writing anywhere in the near future, but I can tell you that I will write as long as have fun doing it
8844408
okay
I have said this several times, but always said it too late for it to effect anything, but whenever discord breaks free, TELEPORT TO PONYVILLE DAMN IT!
8853130
Don't worry. Mathael was smart enough to not erase all the knowledge he had to see the signs. Also like it said in the description, later events will happen with greater changes than the early ones. Just remember the butterfly effect.
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THANK. YOU.
Oh, and will there be displaced coming in?
8853157
not sure yet
What happened to the new chapter?
8853611
Misclicked. Sorry if I have just crushed your hopes and dreams pal, but here's the good news. The next Chapter is already at 8.7k. YAY!!!
8853650
...go die
okay questions oh and if the questions you can't talk of than PM me
1. is your character going to be make a herd or is he going to stay with one mare/girl.
2. is he going to go to different Universe like Don't Be Cocky.
3. is your character going to make a army to protect his equestria Universe from evil.
4. add to the first if he have's a herd who is going to be in it.
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1. I haven't decided that yet but if he is going to make one then it's going to be a small one like 3-4 big, if he decided to make one.
2. Yes. But his travels probably won't take like 14 chapters
3. You mean train the guards? Maybe?
4.If he is going to make one, then I can at least tell you that the main 6 won't be in it, because they are too young for him. Mathaels women taste is not led by beauty, but he won't scream on the street 'come into my herd'. He likes women that have the fire in their eyes, women That have a Real fighter spirit in them.
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1. okay
2. okay
3. no but if any guards who want to join him okay i am talking a built a undead/monster army on the good side 😁
4. okay
make an army and please whats inside the pink shutter in "dont get cocky"
8857449
Hmm... I may have an interesting idea muhahahaha!!!
8857577
The knowledge of the pink shutter is mine and mine alone!!! for now at least...
8857438
The 'come into my herd' thing gave me flashbacks from luffy 'join my crew' moments.
Signs
Did you change his name?
Her.
I think