Just part of what will become a an on going series of stories. Book One covered Starlight Glimmer. the next few will cover Applejack, Rarity, Twilight, Rainbow Dash, and maybe Trixie and Derpy.
Applejack would learn that her family history wasnt always so bright and happy like she had been told when she was a young filly.
Her ancestor had been involved in one of the most bloody battle in the history of Equestria. And it all started with a raid on her ancestors farmstead and lead to one of the longest wars ever recorded.
And she discovers that one of her friends in the present is responsible for nearly unleashing an ancient evil upon the lands of Equestria. Something that will haunt the two of them forever.
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This is the first story I’ve read from you, and I have to say, the complex lore and such seems interesting so far
Though the execution could use some work as there are some roughly-worded sentences as well as chaotic jumps between separate paragraphs and scenes. For example, it’d be great to put a horizonal rule between Gusty’s prophecy and the part featuring Gormlaith to clarify the transition. I also noticed some recurring issues in direct speech and can explain how to fix these, if you wish. It’s all tiny little things, but getting them right would make the story far better.
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Its funny, i just came back and updated now after reading your comment again XD. I should have some more of it worked on in a few days. Ive been making a playlist of my Skyrim lets plays here recently.
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Heh, that’s fine.