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Sparrow9642


I'm a proud brony who reads stuff for a living. I also write darkfics & family-friendly stuff every-so-often. All I can say is, if you plan to read any of my content, happy horrors ;)

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What if love was tested, along with trust under the influence of something unexplainable? Is love strong enough to overcome an unknown evil, or is there a force stronger than love itself?

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so all of Equestria has fallen? or has she simply damaged a great deal of it?

Damn, that was dark... but I'm curious to where Spike was throughout the genocide?.. because if the young dragon had be infected, and had grown into a full size dragon while going on a killing spree, then he'd be a highly destructive force that could honestly level Ponyville in It's entirety and leave nothing but burning ashes in his wake.

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He was more than likely killed by Twilight when the spell was cast, seeing she is very close to Spike. His corpse was just off screen.

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Given Starlight's intelligence in magic, and her personification in this story, all of Equestria was affected by the spell by the time Lyra came to light on the fact that she wasn't dead.

9986791 why did she only save only fillies and not Colts?

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She only targeted blank flanks, and she did recruit colts too, that's just a mistake on my part, because I thought all younger ponies were fillies and not colts.

The concept was pretty great, but I feel like it fell through when the whole “epidemic” story started. It felt rushed and wasn’t as impactful in my opinion, but that’s me being nitpicky!

Did Twilight survive because it doesn't describe her dying......

Also ther is one plothole... Where exactly is Deiscord? I have a feeling he'd have very strong feelings about Fluttershy's head being beaten to a pulp.

i have a hunch that the flower in the dish that lyra ate was a datura aka the devil's breath flower think about it, sleep paralysis, She's seeing things and she's delirious. which is one of the flower's symptoms :rainbowhuh:
I think she was drugged?

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9987053
i like my comment on my theory

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