Spike's recent breakup left him very depressed, in an effort to help him back on his feet the girls take him out on a 3 week vacation. They all get a little more then they expected.
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Crank it up to 11!!!!
Man, that is the dumbest question to ever go tryin' to pass itself off as a question.
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But I'm being serious TT.TT
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Sorry, that was intended to be read as a "Duh, fuck yes you should."
Its always the shy ones that are the most bold & Fluttershy is no expectation. Marvelous job, my friend and I also found this minor error here...
I officially became pudding at the love roar scene… outstandingly great idea
Great chapter, I can see Shy having a secret fetish for fooling around in public and being more or less dominated by Spike. The shy mare deep down love the feeling of doing naughty things and risk being caught doing them and having her drake do whatever he want with her knowing she is always safe with him. As for the Celestia thing, yea I think I could see it. I could see it being that it turn out for years they have had a secret taboo relationship. Or that it finally break and the two have to ravish each other. He will need to go and break off some of that cake flank of hers lol. I mean they both are beings that tend to be stronger than the average pony so they must have spent their lives holding back, but with each other they wouldn't have to, Spike can be as dragon as he want and Celestia doesn't have to worry about being too rough or hot to hurt him.
Plot twist!!! Spike's girlfriend was actually Chrysalis… Upon discovering that she was falling in love with Spike; Chrysalis decided to end their relationship. She devised the most hurtful breakup she could think of. 'Burning her bridges', as they say; in an effort to never be able to get back together with spike. Chrysalis knew if she left a way back into Spike's heart; she would give up her ambitions, to stay with him…
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I'll tell you what's not fair! Why can't it be meeeeeeeee?!
Stupid sexy spike and his freakin harem fantasies come true
PS - is the thunderstorm incident a real story, or just another part of this story i need to be envious of
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Idea!!! Comment story!!!
Chrysalis' Diary
Chapter 1: Alone
Curse them… that retched unicorn and traitorous changeling. How dare they take what is mine; my hive, my subjects, my everything! I'm alone… ButI will reclaim what is rightfully mine no matter WHAT IT TAKES.
Chapter 2: Looking Back
What lead to this; Why did my changeling betray me? Thorax… hmf, he sits on my throne an declares himself a KING!!! That pathetic larva, How did he become like this; Who turned him against me? If I recall correctly before he dragged his malignant carapace back to usurp my throne; he dwelled in the domain of my almost husband, and ever so vexing "princess of love" blech! So it is there I will start my 'investigation'…
Do it.
I think you should only have Spike fool around with the Princesses if all the other girls are okay with it in advance.
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Hey if you can keep it going go for it
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It's not that big a deal in my head, besides I might HAVE to or be torn apart
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Thanks, it was just a random idea that popped into my head and got bigger the more I thought about it… I even have the last chapter-ish thing pretty much worked out. The in between is in a soft flux that will solidify in accordance with the story… I'm contimplating putting up the next part now or waiting till next chapter
to answer the authors note I'd say I'd at least hope to see Spike and Luna have some fun.
This story needs some editing for spelling, grammar, punctuation, and syntax, but the story itself is strong and fun to read. Look forward to more.
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Grrr… getting the general flow of what was going to be the story, but the fine details elude me!!!
Act 1: chrysalis hatches a plan to get revenge and gather enough love/power to take back her kingdom; ending with the first date with spike…
Act 2: chrysalis' diary entries, in the second person when describing her persona' dates with spike, start drifting to first person. Around the time that change begins to happen spike would have pulled that relationship talk…
Act 3: chrysalis starts becoming content with the relationship. After spike chooses her over his friends for some event; she starts to feel awful for making him have to choose. Hit with these emotions, and almost forgetting her plan, she regresses and decides to break up… she decides it to be so complete a break; that she will not have the chance to fall back into the trap that is spike.
Act 4: a depressed chrysalis (after fight) feels empty and has no drive to go through with the plan… checking to see if spike moved on she discovers (depressed state spike) and begins to feel anger at him for being depressed instead of furious at her. She is mad at his friends for not cheering him up (she can feel their emotions for him). She hates herself for making him like this…
Arc 5: is alongside the main story where chrysalis pulls some inception tipe stuff, and keeping watch in spike's dates. After the main story she conseals her diary in the hollow arm of a replica of her throne; using most of the magic she received from spike to seal it shut. She then proceeds to use what's left for Celestial to find her. Trying to get the Tartarus torture package; she starts gloating to celestia about her part in spike's depression…
Story End: an angry celestia puts a spell on chrysalis to relive her most painful memory over and over, in a sleep/nightmare like state. The nightmare/memory is the fight with spike with all her good memories of their relationship burning away, being replaced with the scenes of spike on his dates… as celestia and luna leave, Luna wonders what the memory is; because on chrysalis' crying face is a faint smile…
Sequel conditions:
Someone finds chrysalis' diary or Luna looks in on her memory in curiosity…
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Yeesh
OFOMAOAMFIFAOWDMOWMAOM I LOVE IT!
*Reads the vote ratio* ... wow, looks like Oedipus made a bunch of voting accounts again....
I like this chapter because while the others portray the girls coming to terms with their feelings for Spike, Fluttershy is shown to already have those feelings, recognizes them for what they are, and is just reaffirming them. It must've been very hard for her to deal with Spike dating somepony else, especially since that somepony restricted his time with her and the other girls.
But I wonder how the other girls will react to Fluttershy's confession? Did they already know that she had feelings for him all this time?
Finally got around ta reading this. It's enticing and alluring. A very good read. I'm eager ta see who Spike goes out with next now that he's finished his date with Fluttershy.
Omfg
Again.
Poor spike he has to be blue balled to all hell
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Last time, promise
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He's going to wreak the made who finally snags him
I'm loving the story so far keep it up friendo!
That was a good chapter XP One suggesting, go back and add nude breasts to where she lifts her sweater up, cause as it reads he could be touching them directly or through her bra. Aside from that, a perfect Shy chapter!
ey, this chapter was posted on my Birthday
Oh, you bastard. I both hate and love you, right now. YOu've captured them all so well. Pinkie's chapter had me cracking up, throughout even the sexual stuff, it was hilarious. Starlight's nailed it with how insecure and uncertain of herself and her place she is. But this. . . .
I was in tears in several places, and felt choked up the entire time. When Fluttershy asked him why he chose the other mare, I just broke.
Congrats. You've written an amazing story, and I look forward to the next chapter. ;) :D
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Thank you very much!
I kind of want near the end of the story to have the bitch mare come back and insult the main 6 + sunset and Starlight and Spike getting pissed
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Oh same