Spike's recent breakup left him very depressed, in an effort to help him back on his feet the girls take him out on a 3 week vacation. They all get a little more then they expected.
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I'm glad to see this updated! Keep up the great work!
i hate you and i love you! i hate you cuase now i cant sleep(its 5am here...) and i have work on 7, but i love you for this story over all and cant wait for more now
U P D A T E D ! ! !
Holy Jesus, Twilight & Spike doing the nasty, was so worth the long wait! Incredible job!
...you mean to tell me that Spike's ex is none other than SWEETIE BELLE??? or is this another character that happens to also be named Sweetie?
It's a wonder how Rarity and Sweetie are on good terms if it reveals that Sweetie Belle is the reason that Spike was so depressed....and I don't care that they are sister, nopony hurts her...oh sorry, THEIR, Spikey-wikey. Even more so that after that Interlude chapter I'm pretty sure Celestia would be a bit less than pleased if she ran by Spike's ex...Angry mother is an understatement...That mare is going to the moon, but unlike Luna, she's not immortal and kinda needs air to live in the almost-vacuum that is the moon and space in general....
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No, Spike has Had 2 Girlfriends so far before the Main Six, His first was Sweetie Belle, but they broke up on good terms more than likely, and it was when they were younger. The Ex that everyone wants to stab in the eyes with a rusted soup spoon is someone else, I don't remember if there was a name for her, but it's not Sweetie Belle
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Stop
Sweetie and Spike dated when they were teens
THe ex that all this is about is NOT Sweetie
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Well, thanks for comfirming it at least....Could not help but jump to conclusions a bit. I didn't know that Spike had someone before the dreaded ex; I'm pretty sure the Momlestia chapter didn't even mention that Spike and Sweetie Belle were a couple at some point (makes me wonder now if this is a possible reason that Rarity may actually like Spike in a romantic manner now--on second thought, it's probably still one of those events that she's helping Spike recover from his nasty breakup that nearly broke him).
I guess we will never get to see a name for her, so I'm assuming Spike's most recent ex is an OC, and even though it's tempting, ultimately it's not really needed to know who drug Spike through the mud... after all, The story is about showing Spike that there are more fish in the sea and that there were already girls that already love him for him, and this bout of depression just confirms the Mane 7's feels for Spike...
Thanks again for the confirmation.
I've been periodically checking this fic for awhile, but I'm really enjoying it and finding myself increasingly addicted with every new chapter, so I'm glad that you updated it! Your grammar leaves abit to be desired, but I really enjoy the progression between characters/chapters, and though Spike-harem fics are nothing new, the premise for this one is fairly unique.
I like how the dreaded "Ex" isn't really given a name or an accurate description beyond a vague outline of her personality. While her actions make her a target for our distaste, and give the story an "antagonist" to contrast to the more pure feeling that the other ponies feel for Spike, keeping her motivations (beyond, possibly, simple selfishness) vague helps the story to instead focus on the healing of Spike's psyche, rather than turn it into a vengeful fic where any feelings the others have towards Spike are marred by thoughts of vengeance or hatred.
That being said, if there is chapter/epilogue where they return to Ponyville, and said Ex does try to reunite with Spike, I think I would most enjoy seeing her reaction upon learning she isn't needed, and the smugness of the other ponies as they revel in the knowledge that they know, for a fact, that their relationships with Spike are far healthier and more stable for him than hers was.
I also really like how things progress with each character in each chapter, while still having the "herd" as a whole being informed of each event to gauge and support the others' actions. Fluttershy turning out to be "primary" girlfriend who'd been harboring secret feelings for awhile was unexpected, but also a nice choice. To be honest, I thought Twilight would be saved as the last character, so she'd be more secure in the knowledge of the others' feelings towards Spike before going all the way herself. Now I'm left in anticipation of who will be the first to go "all the way". Long-time crush Rarity? Or maybe multiple characters at once?
Hope you update again soon!
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A very concise and thoughtful takeaway, I'm glad that I was able to get this kind of feeling out of, anyone really.
This. This made me happy. I tried very hard for it to be understood that while she is an antagonist, the story isn't about revenge. It's about moving on. I never will see Spike as the vindictive person he has been in lots of the fics that star him getting his heart broken. I always view him as being pained but moving on after taking a step back and coming to understand that life just happens sometimes.
I also am working hard to justify the harem ending
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You couldn't have said it any better.
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Thanks! I'm really enjoying the story, and getting more into it every chapter!
kiss on his lower lips, getting a shivering moan from Twilight. He slower this time, - kiss on her lower lips, getting a shivering moan from Twilight. He was slower this time,
Well... that was hot and romantic. The part about talking without saying anything was really great particularly. Now to wait for the next one, slowly running out of mares lol.
Now I don't normally comment on these kinds of stories. Or any stories really, but this is just beautiful. You've captured these characters so perfectly and made their raomance extremely believable. I'm not exactly a mom incest fan by any stretch, but I appreciate most of that chapter, and celestia as a mom is (until that part) very believable for how an intentionally embarrassing mom would be. Fluttershy's chapter gave me the greatest warm fuzzies ever, and the pthers were all fantastic in their own way. I started out seeing spike and the ex's conflict as two sided, but with some great exposition which never got boring I'm 100% spike side. I'm hoping that we get to see spike and sweetie belle rekindle because that's my favorite ship of the show. That also leads me to the best part of the story. IT'S NOT DEAD! I've seen so many great stories that have great characters, pacing, writing, and so on. Then when I check when the next chapter is, it's last updated five years ago. I nearly wooted in joy when I saw the oldest comment was last sunday. As a suggestion, when spike goes "all the way" I hope it's not with any of their individual chapters. And I also don't think it should be in a big orgy at the end of the story. Perhaps a mini anthology of him and his new waifus settling in back at home, and becoming closer and more intimate in the process. And then end off with the orgy. You're doing a great job of blue-balling us, and giving us just a little bit more each time. Don't stop the good work now.
You should keep this going asap, my dude. This is some quality smut right here. I need that next chapter, y'know?
damn i hope this stori isint dead
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It isn't
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where are you man D: we need more chapters D:
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Real life
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i know i know im just being inpatient even thow i know that life kicks you in the most unexpected moments. Its just that this story is really good and i already read it like 10 times and it still catches my heart
So I’m guessing Rarity is next then right?
PantieWHAT? Its spelled pantihose (Now I need to delete my history)