Spike's recent breakup left him very depressed, in an effort to help him back on his feet the girls take him out on a 3 week vacation. They all get a little more then they expected.
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my god! YOU ARE BACK?! thank Luna you are back with the story
What do you mean by that?
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Sex
IT LIIIIIVES!
Spike this whole trip is about you getting laid consequence free. She's invited you to slip into her room at night and bone her awake... DO IT FOOL
Sadly, it probably controls the rules of tennis for the entire kingdom for historical reasons, the same way an obscure Scottish golf club controls the rules of British golf. Either that, or they run the Equestrian Open tennis tournament and the would-be hijackers wanted to embezzle the sponsorship money.
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Do you mean that it is sex but the end of each chapter gets -- No, I'm kidding.
I'm just glad your back. Great to see this update and it was a great chapter.
I missed you, and this story. Thank you for the chapter.
Welcome back! And props for not portraying Blueblood as a total douchenozzle. He aint my favorite, I dont like his Hasbro self, but when other authors write him in like a brotherly figure? That's when I like him. Anyway it was a really nice filler chapter, so keep up the good work and take the time you need, friend!
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I mean, more like sexual content, no ones actually had sex yet if memory serves, though it has been a while so I could be wrong. That being said, Trixie seemed to deserve it a whole lot there with how much she did for him. Wasn't the vacation her idea originally, too? I really don't remember, but I feel like it was.
But yeah, this chapter is awesome even without the sex, as Spike himself said. Trixie made it all come together into a night with his bros(Ember counts, shes fits in better than Thorax in that sense, just saying). So yeah getting the full gang and the little nods to things like Ember and Thorax being engaged/married, Discord looking out for Shy, and Blueblood's brotherly awesomeness, was really great. Trixie stepped up, and it was damn impressive and gonna be hard to top.
I stand corrected, Sunset won the day. Thinking back, I remember being pretty surprised when that happened, case with every date escalating I figured that the final date would be the one with sex.
I also tend to read dialogue between characters and occasionally feel confused, but I think that's good cause these characters have all this time together they built up, and like any outsider would be to such a conversation, you just don't know all the inside jokes, all the experience that they share and hardly need to say to remember. It's really quite nice.
Good to see this story is finally back. Nice to see bLieblood not a complete douchebag. Discord was entertaining today the least. I gotta admit I was hoping when Ember was shown, she'd become part of Spike's harem. I just was never onboard with Embrax.
Now, I'm very interested about Trixie here. I think initially it was clear she didn't want to be a part of Spike's harem, but now she seems a bit more open to joining up and letting Spike have sex with her. I get the feeling that Trixie will be the last mare to become part of Spike's harem.
Wonder how his special pen-pal heard about this?
This story is among the first ones I read when I discovered this site around a year ago... and I have to say, I am so incredibly happy to see it updated. Especially liking just a scene of him with his friends. But seems like Trixie may want to join the harem after all. so that's a plus. Love how you portray this story... one of the best harem stories I've ever read. Largely because the relationship is realistically portrayed and the girls all are so supportive of eachother. It's so rare to see that.
It lives once again!
Update! Another great chapter, even without sex. Shame really, Trixie is just so hot, in a really obvious way!
Maybe later though!
Oh shit son you’re back YES
She went for Blueblood, but couldn't get Shining to tag along and make it a brotherly duo? Ah, well, Spike just appreciates her efforts, and that's more than good enough.
And welcome back! It's been too long, but I hope that you're life has been going well/getting better in the meantime.
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Patience young one
only half way through this and going on my bookshelf and my favorite list
Great job