Spike's recent breakup left him very depressed, in an effort to help him back on his feet the girls take him out on a 3 week vacation. They all get a little more then they expected.
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So um, hadda stop at the bit with Rainbow and Flutters, because suddenly Spike got a second dick? It wasn't mentioned AT ALL before that...so it really broke the immersion
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He's had two for like...since Rainbow gave him a blowjob though?
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Which happened in the same chapter, and wasn't referenced until after, so it literally appeared outta nowhere just so he could dick down Rainbow and Fluttershy at the same time... if it had been mentioned ANYWHERE else, I'd be fine with it...but a second cock is not a very good Deus Ex Machina
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My friend, I need you to notice, that there are 14 other chapters, one of them is a stand alone chapter with Rainbow, its mentioned there and every chapter after
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It was mentioned and shown in Chapter 6: Rainbows Are Found on Paths Untraveled
I mentions the Upper is for reproduction and the lower is likely for stimulation
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i checked in this chapter, not once until the second is used is it ever mentioned in this chapter
Member, one, so.... yeah, with how long it took for updates to come out, I'd completely forgotten he had 2 in this story until Rainbow 'remembers' that there was a second one she ignored...and apparently everyone else had
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This parts here, but also fair
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You dropped this my lord 👑
Totally worth the wait!
Now that was a great chapter to return with.
Glad you updated! To be honest, I kinda thought this fic had been abandoned, so this was a very pleasant surprise!
Though I doubt the mares would've objected to having Spike do them in any particular order, having him do them in reflection of the order of his dates with them was also somewhat poetic.
Heh, in some parts of this chapter, it's hard to visualize that Spike is actually smaller in stature than the mares are. Good thing he has draconic strength to go along with it. And libido, because going at it at least nine times in a row would drain any normal stallion, I'm sure.
But each mare discovered something about themselves and had their fantasies fulfilled, and also learned the same thing about each other. There'll no doubt be many embarrassing discussions in the morning (or afternoon, since Spike obviously sent some of them into a pleasure-coma), but the group as a whole will be stronger and closer because of it, since each one now knows they can trust the others with their most personal kinks and intimate personas and won't be judged for it.
They cheered Spike up, and he cheered them up in return. Even having just one of them as his new partner would result in a lifetime of loyalty and happiness, but having all nine (possibly more if you included Trixie...or Gabby when he gets back) all devote themselves to him, and to each other, in the same way, with unwavering loyalty, there'll never be any doubt in any of their minds that they will be loved or that the group will split up ever again. Spike will always be there, and they'll always keep each other happy. Mission accomplished.
(...Still, more chapters, please!)
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Uhh... so, all these chapters Spike apparently has 2 dicks and then suddenly he only has 1?
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He has always had two, i know. I wrote it.
Welcome back, and great job!
P.S. Sorry to hear about the troubles. Try to keep your head up!
I read a couple of chapters of this, and its just not for me. While I like the writing, I have an issue with just how close to real life this actually is. Usually my complaint is when a story is unrealistic. For example when someone who just met the princess picks her up and tucks her into bed. That just wouldn't happen in the scenario as written. Stories need some basis on reality. However I come here to get away from the horrors of reality, and watching poor Spike get cock blocked for several chapters, ending his day with nothing, is just too realistic. I want to root for the hero, I want to cheer when he succeeds and cringe when he fails.
I understand what the writer has intended here. He intends for Spike to get further and further as the dates progress untill hitting a big payoff. There is nothing wrong with that idea at all. Its worked well in the past and it will probably work well now. Just not the sort of thing that I'm usually in the mood for.
Monk
"It turns out that prostitution was viewed as an honest profession. However, how ponies figured out this was their special talent when most ponies got their cutie marks in grade school was suspiciously glossed over whenever the subject came up." -Typist Gray
Wow, blast from the past. For whatever it is worth, you haven't lost your touch. Your style of writing remains consistently enjoyable, despite the time lapse between 'Better Than This' and 'Long Night'.
I was just so happy to see an update! So many amazing works have been dropped for years before they come back from the dead lol. Besides, since it had been so long, it allowed me to go reread the story from the start again. I'm glad your in a place to write again. I hope things continue to go well
Definitely glad to see this start up once more. I'd always kept my eye on it. Spike has got that dragon stamina for days and I'm here for it. I half expected Trixie to be sitting next to the door listening, or recording ha. This would make bank as a porn video. Also, I take it Spike had put some kinda mind fuckery on Rairty with his eyes?
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Its more like something I figure is something cool with dragons, when they're on the hunt or trying to threaten their eyes glint and glow, junk like that
Good chapter
I can't read this chapter really I tried and there's nothing wrong with it it's similar to the other date chapters but spike speedruns through his mates it's just I have a limit which surprises me cause I have nothing against stories with porn in them it's just I don't think I've read a story with this much porn like it's not even a bad thing I enjoy this story my favorite chapter was what are friends for or something like it's like eating when your already full I got my fill of porn from the chapters and I couldn't with this one but still though this is a well written story kudos to you man
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I did warn that this chapter was just sex, the next couple have more going on and focus on stuff better imo, i hope you'll read the last three and enjoy them. But thank you regardless