• Member Since 4th Sep, 2017
  • offline last seen January 17th

jasien


If you write a comment on my story, I'll write a comment on yours.

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Normally, Fluttershy has to spend her birthday in the company of other ponies; and there's nothing wrong with that, of course, but once in a while she just needs to get away from it all. With Angel Bunny in tow, she sets off to a quiet little hill overlooking Ponyville determined to enjoy this one in peace and quiet. Still, if another pony was to disrupt her solitude, would it really be such a bad thing?

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Comments ( 7 )

This was such a sweet one-off story and I love it!

JackRipper
Story Approver

Adorable. :twilightsmile:

I wish I could get likes without a single dislike... we can only dream I suppose... but they were only a dream! (You still get like from me)

8665690

Thank you very much!

8665701

Thank you! I try my best.

8665752

Much appreciated!

8666448

If you write solely in the hopes of garnering zero dislikes, you probably won't make yourself very happy; do what you love doing, and build up an audience that feels the same way.

8666654
And you hit the feels with that little speech of yours.

I note your crossed-out username and I'm therefore not sure whether you still read this, but just in case...

Full review here, but in brief: this is nicely written, especially for a new ponyfic author. The long, almost Dickensian sentences won't be to all tastes, but I quite liked them. Pinkie's speech late on doesn't really sound like her, and I wonder whether that's a bit of Voice of the Author creeping in. Still, a pleasant piece of quiet Flutterfic and it gets a like from me.

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