• Member Since 23rd Dec, 2013
  • offline last seen Jul 30th, 2019

ThatShakeWeight


Yeah, I love this site but I no longer consider myself much of a brony. Stopped watching the show a while ago so I'm more of someone eagerly searching for a good story, wherever it may originate from.

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Desolate Daybreak is an average pony. The galaxy is a big place, but Daybreak's world is small. Orphaned at thirteen, with nothing to his name but a pilot's license and a run-down apartment; he wants but one thing: freedom. How far will he go for it? This is the story of how Desolate Daybreak earned his wings.

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Teen rating is for profanity and some violence later on in the story.

This story is heavily inspired by The Stars Beyond The Veil by Charlemane. I would very much recommend checking out that story as well.

Note that this is my first story on Fimfiction, and I would love it if you'd take the time to leave a bit of constructive criticism in the comment section below. In addition, I wouldn't hold my breath on regular uploads; I'm a busy guy and I don't have much time to dedicate to writing. If anything, I get sporadic bursts of inspiration and have to capitalize on them quickly. Again, I would very much appreciate any criticism, good or bad, below.

Also, this cover art was created using Google and Photoshop. If I used your image and you would like the cover art to be taken down, just PM me and I'll get to it as soon as I can. Thank you!

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 4 )

Not bad. You will get better.

Enjoying your story so far and can't wait for the next chapter.

Enjoying the story so far and eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

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