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Lorhelei


"Be happy for me, and for all who fly free"

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Discord know the meaning of war. For him, war is like his children.

But ponies deny his children with their fake harmony and friendship. They just trying to control everyone and everything through peace.

Meanwhile, in another place, another race has done the opposite. The had embrace war, love it, use it, and with it, they become stronger. But at a certain point, they lost the way.

Now the war is just a game, with controlled soldiers on a controlled battlefield. They just kill for the bloodshed with no thoughts about it. They have developed weapons of mass destructions, defiling everything that means war...

Now... As the embodiment of chaos. He can not leave that just like that, can he?


Again, thanks to sejox for transforming my barely readable text into something slightly readable, hehe. Thank you, even with your busy schedule you help me a lot.

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Comments ( 13 )

8603019

War... War has changed...

Reference = Catched :coolphoto:

THIS, This is a true God of Chaos!
You've nailed it!

8603252
Thank you! I mean... Really, Thank you hehe. It means a lot :twilightsmile:

8603291
It is well disserved.
I have read many fanfics about Discord, and many have written him well.
They make him complex, they make him hilarious, they make him devilishly clever on both good and evil sides of the coin.
But few seem to match my belief of his title, Lord/God of Chaos. To me Chaos is the most neutral active force in the universe, the only thing more neutral is inactivity, it cares not who it harms, or whom it helps, nor who is born or who is dead, as long as things are changing it is happy. It is not the embodiment of malice, for it gains no joy though suffering, and it is not merciful for it has no joy in compassion. True Chaos is simply change, and change is the most necessary component of all living beings, and thus we must have Chaos. As long as the last second is vastly different from the last in some way shape or form, then it is content.

And this story fits not only my philosophy in that Discord wishes change and progress most of all, but also mixes his personality in that he chose the most fun and chaotic path that is most suiting to him without thinking about the immediate repercussions of his choice. (Despite my description of Chaos, Discord does have a favorite in Fluttershy and slowly others. His got a lot of explanting to do when, or if, she finds out his part of the upcoming war.)

And I love the thought you put into Discord's love for war, he is not just in it to see people die for the lol'z (Though that may be a small part of it) War to him is just a part of Chaos, a large part of it really. Life becomes death, love turns to hate, tactics and tech constantly change and evolve. Even after war, comes even more innovations for multitude of reasons, love being rediscovered, technology used for war is repurposed for other projects, and even change entire cultures. This is a very interesting prospect that can be a book all on it's own.

Overall, this just may be worth a read. Cry 'Havoc', and let loose the dogs of War!- William Shakespeare; Julius Caesar

8603361

Someone who shares the same point of view of what 'Discord' means :pinkiehappy:

<3

I saw a few grammar errors but besides that the story is looking good so far keep up the good work

8840554

Oh, can you point them out? English is not my first language and neither of the editor of this one, hehe.

This is a pretty good read so far, a lot of grammatical errors though.

Alright, how do they fuck up? :trixieshiftright:

8841645
God dammit. I can't never get rid of those no matter how many times I read it :applecry:

Can you point them out?


8842250
The real question is "How can they not fuck it up" :coolphoto:

8842642
Hehe.
Now I know that I'll have a good time~ :ajsmug:
you know, besides all the death and destruction... :twilightoops:

YAY! CHAOS!!!:pinkiecrazy:

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