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Scourge the yellow cat


"Welcome to Earth. Population: Hell." ~Scourge 2018

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Ponyville is in a frenzy when a series of ruins are discovered in the Everfree Forest. But things are never as they seem in the forest, as somethings are best left forgotten. But when one of those things are awakened, usually it is a rude one. As this object is being awakened, fleeing soldiers forced to leave their home enters a new one, with major complications. Equestria in response attempts to cope with this sudden problem, on the brink of collapse as it is already under a diplomatic crisis.


Daybreaker, the Solar Empress of the Solar Empire of Equestria, had finally defeated the resistance that had vowed against her and had conquered their home. Yet she wants more land, more power, and more ponies under her rule. Fortunately for her, a major discovery might just grant that. As the two Equestrias clash, one question is uncertain:

Which side would win?

This story is going to be massive, involving many characters, villains, factions, and contains many tags. Many warnings will be toned down as much as possible for Teen. Humans are included in this story, although the tag will appear misplaced for this story. Finally, please take into consideration that this is my first 'true' story, what I mean is that it is my story where I am actually trying to write a decent story, and not like my other cringy stories. Feedback is highly recommended.

Certain things may not make sense in the beginning will explain itself as the story progresses.

I am including dimensions to this story. They're classified as such:
Text in this font mean that the highlighted text/place is under enemy control
Text in this font mean that the highlighted text/place is under 'good' control

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 8 )

That author's note completely changed how I was going to approach this comment. The best suggestion I can make is to read as many stories in English as you can. Apart from that, it felt like this was a bit rushed. Perhaps some imagery to help the reader understand what's going on. Oh, make sure you don't use parenthesis to talk directly to the reader. It really disrupts the story when you do that.

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I understand the rushed portion of your comment. But when you haven't written anything for a long time, plus getting many, many negative comments, you try to change pace.
This is actually what I needed to know, thank you😁

8784839
You're welcome. At first I was thinking, 'shouldn't this person know this stuff?' But the I saw the author's note and realized that the answer to the question was no. So I decided to be supportive.

So when do the evil/potentially opposite versions of the Mane Six appear?

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No promises, but it might happen sooner than you think :raritywink:

Oh god...well, it seems we have a stalemate. I so want to make a movie joke, but I will hold back, only because I'm interested into how all this is going to play out.

Just saying, they had just met. but I promise you that there will be a domino chain going due to this. What is it? Not going to spoil it. When? In due time.

Well...it seems like we got interdimensional war on our hands. That...is really bad.

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