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myeah not very sure about that one but I kinda like the idea, I'l keep my judgement for later.
For now, keet it up! I know that many seemingly weird stories managed to be really good in the end!
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You are welcome. I wasn't even sure about what kind of protagonist was writing and how to handle a troll one. I appreciate your opinion.
Besides, the first main chapters (1, 2, and 3) are the only one that i wrote using the protagonist P.O.V. to introduce not only the reader (including you) to the his mindset, but to me as well. I was wondering what gone wrong.
But that is just a doubt of mine.
this story is awesome pls make more
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Sorry for delay about commenting you. My head was somewhere else. Two things.
1)You are right about my story. In fact I'm not even I'm sure about how Is going to be pulled off. But the plot, more or less, Is impressed in my mind... Though it's mostly slow. Plus I have to rearrange and replace some chapters because I wanted to exploit some missed opportunities.
2)I put the title Madness Overlord just for cool effect.... This until I managed give it a real meaning. However the 'Overlord' part will be revealed eventually, but only after two other chapters and a few of corrections.
Also, I'm actually thinking about a remake that make even sense, but I don't know If that will be after I finished this one or I even abandoned this one. Also, thank you for the critical judgement.
Does Suzaku Aki sound like the Suzaku from Yu Yu Hakusho?
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I don't had considered this impression because I have watched much less of Yu Yu Hakusho. Only the latter parts of the Tournament Ark, the majority of the Shinobu Sensui Squad Ark and the grand finale.
My very initial point with Suzaku was to make a main character who was chosen by Balamos to oppose the Elements of Insanity, who is also kind of a jackass that was dragged into Equestria, turned into a pony freak with warped powers powerful enough to contrast them. Of course there is the part in which he had to turn ponies into freaks and recruit them in Balamos' army. It looked fun at first... But then I had realized that the plot that I had planned can be slow as molasses and was really about to take a long time before advancing to the significant point.
Which is why was thinking to make a remake of this when I have more time and ideas to carry on eventually.
Oh, I had also planned to give a sense to the title of this story except for the fact that I had to reveal it's meaning in the future chapters. Now you are asking why I'm still continuing this if I'm thinking about to remake that? Well because I would had at least the courtesy to release the chapters that I have done so far before start over.
Spoiler below:
-In the next chapter, Starcider Glimsho ended up fighting The Subjects.
-In two chapters later: Suzaku was killed while fighting The Subjects, Yuki Terumi's spirit reveals his identity as Aidan, He then got resurrected as a bipedal pony-like monstrosity literally right in front of the two freaks and becomes the Overlord.