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Reizthefakebrony


I'm just a ambiguous individual who had just started to take a look to this site.

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It's been two months since her exile caused by Starlight Glimmer, and Thorax if she would include that. Chrysalis has, of course, refused to be reformed, and had no guilt about his decision. She is
now preparing her revenge..... Until a mysterious pony showed up in front of her new home and tried to reform her by any meanings in a very sinister-ish manner. Worst of all, that pony is working for someone from above and is willing to reform her in order to satisfy his superiors' reforming status quo.

Can Chrysalis escape his reforming methods and preserve her dear integrity as a villain? how much nonsensical can this story possibly get? And most of all who is gonna help her in this annoying quest?

Fourth Wall breaking and attempted philosophical introspective of her character ensured... i think.

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Comments ( 5 )

OH SHET!!!:pinkiegasp: It has a Random tag! :twilightoops: RUN FOR THE HILLS!!!

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Look, i don't think i should care about that. To be honest, i wasn't expecting this fan fiction to work. I just wrote that as a experiment.

The objective of this "comedy" was to explain Chrysalis' valid reason to refuse to being reformed and put that in a very exaggerated manner. To be honest, the way i wrote this one was forced and lazy as i'm realizing it right now. But if some of you liked, good. If not, i expected this. Not biggie.

Besides, was my way to write and narrate that story lazy and pretentious? No, because i'm starting to doubt about my abilities.

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It looks good to me, maybe some grammar errors, but if there are any, I didn't notice. The story is good, don't doubt your abilities. Sure, some people are not going to like it, but that's their opinion, so don't let that discourage you.

By the way, the random thing was just a joke, sorry if it sounded like I disliked the story.

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