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Reizthefakebrony


I'm just a ambiguous individual who had just started to take a look to this site.

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The remake of my old work. Although that features the Elements of Insanity, this story is just a spin off and took place before Season 5 finale. The story will be different while retaining some similarities.

Two months after the victory over of the Subjects, the Elements of Insanity were building a portal to return to Equestria when their leader, Brutalight Sparcake, had nightmare about a mysterious bipedal, pony-like, demonic creature being able to obliterate them, which was more a vision than just a dream. Unbeknownst to them, Painset Shimmercake and Magic Mare managed to survive and were able to arrive in Equestria before them, just in time to plot their vengeance against them and Princess Celestia as well.

Brutalight wasn't too far from the truth...

In the human world, a brony bashing troll and former delinquent leader named Alex Phirrel, was framed one of his classmates for a crime that he didn't commit. That resulted him to be put under probation and transferred into a delinquent school. One night, when he was caught as he was investigating the whereabouts of a friend of his in his new school, a hermetic entity transported him, you guessed, in Equestria in pony form.

And just screw him over, Alex was also possessed by some ghost and got some bizarre powers and was tasked by the same entity to take down the Elements of Insanity in exchange for his freedom. Initially, he refused to accept his new situation until he got killed. At that point, the ghost who resided inside him resurrected him and turned him into a powerful overlord. He ended up liking it. With his rise, his villainous quest begins.

Will Alex succeed in this absurd quest? Will the Elements of Insanity being able to defeat a villain with that kind of power? And more importantly, what is the entity's real motivation to involve the boy into this?

Like with my previous work, if you don't know anything about the Elements of Insanity, check this channel: https://www.youtube.com/user/TheInvertedShadow

MLP belong to Hasbro.
Elements of Insanity and other characters belongs to Inverted-Shadow, KaverenTheHunter08 and FlammingHammer97.

Before this thing, let me warn you:

1) Since that story will be like the other one, I will put the Death, Gore and Violence tag, with the exception to tone them down a little bit.

2) Due to the Elements of Insanity being featured, lets just say that the Comedy tag were pretty much mandatory, thought the only preoccupation was how I am going to handle it since the main character has few, sometime.

3) Just to make things clear, one of the pony freaks that was present in my previous story is included in this one as well, leaving the other ones being replaced by someone else.

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 5 )

why has nobody giving a like to this story? I liked the firts one but I think that this version is better With the introductions AND content.

Don't worry, i will stick with you in this story and many others.:pinkiesmile:

Now he is possesed like the first version, Instead of an enemy of a game. He is possesed by an A.I and even better, he is in control of his own body.
I am only an expectator, so the best i can do, is read.

Well, now it is time to bring the insanity to the story. To much power and we can hope to see him struggling to win.
(everybody knows that most people dislike OP Characters when there is no enemy who can compare to him or somebody to put him in place)

please, keep the OP'ness levels on low until you have to develop(what a weird word) the characters. Not like "star eater" because he was OP since the start. He has fans but because of the quality of the content and the quantity of the content.

This is a step far away from your original concept of the story you had. It is a huge improvement for the new story you made and quite enjoyable to read but this kind of thing is happening to fast, not much like the first story in which you took your time or at least it seems that the story took its time to develop.

I enjoyed and loved the story "MLP- New Game Plus Postmortem".

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