Hello Again! Here we are, the final part (Part 3) of the Burning Star Saga!
Before reading this, read my previous stories "Nightmare Ponyville" and "Dark Star of Shadows" first.
First Story of Burning Star Saga: Dark Star of Shadows
Second Story of Burning Star Saga: Nightmare Ponyville
It's time to end this battle, Burning Star now faces a threat so great, it will not be stopped without the help of Twilight, her friends, and a few of Burning Star's old friends as well... and a foe from the movie as Well!
There will be action, adventure, and a interesting villain in the form of Queen Diamanda... who will stop at nothing until all of Equestria is underneath her frozen hoof!
Also... Burning Star's already immense powers are growing at an alarming rate... this can't end well, can it?
Yeah he's probably going to die to Burning Star.
Clearly Twilight has had enough of this Mysterious Stallion!
So Quickfire's like Freedom Fighter from A Rather Large Adventure, only a lot less secretive...and can talk...and works alone. Anyway, he's cool.
Quickfire's definitely the most interesting pony so far in the entire trilogy. The only thing I thought was off about him was him revealing himself way too quickly.
Dgahhh...the mere idea of Blueblood doing that with anyone just makes me want to slap him so high into the air he'd burn up on reentry.
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I agree, but Queen Diamanda did dispose of him.
Did I write in the fact he survived that ordeal?
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He revealed himself in order to try and snap some sense back into Twilight.
Just a random thought right here...why do so many writers on this site have to antagonize Luna and Celestia?
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Well, there is very little known about them, and no one seems to want to anger them...
People (or Ponies) assume the worst, in most cases.
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And also, the whole "using Twilight as a pawn." Thing, don't tell me you haven't seen it in the show, Brady,
Yes, I've seen it in the show. You can certainly take it like that, I'll admit.
Or maybe Celestia wanted her to have her experience increase by exposing her to trials and tribulations. You don't grow your potential by having your mentor take care of every little problem to come your way. By making Twilight learn to take care of problems with her friends, she made Twilight into someone strong and into a believer that friendship is the powerful force Celestia insists it is. Celestia and Luna aren't lazy by not taking care of the problems themselves, they're building up the strength of Twilight in order to mold her to her proper potential.
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Possibly, but it seems like Twilight is more than strong enough to lead.
*In best Mortal Combat announcer voice* ROUND ONE FIGHT!
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I swear Umbra is like a pest: no matter how many times you get rid of them they keep coming back.
Fatality!
A living flame maybe?
Ah, another narcissistic villain.
"Burn baby burn"
Oh wonderful... Forbidden love...
Ummm...
*Flashback
Yeah...
Of course they are.
FU - SOIN - HA!
WHY!?
So, tall, but skinny as hell.
You say that but, in Yharnam fire is the symbol of purification.
I don't regret a thing.
I swear...
ok now it looks like you are cramming every villain in the story