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Vanscyoc04


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Nightmare moon has returend and equestria has fallen under her control. Celestia, her student starlight glimmer,and her friends have escaped and are planing to take back equestria but they know they can't do it alone. so they seek out the help of Celestia's former student, Twilight, the captain of the sky jewel( a flying pirate ship) and the pirates of harmony, but will they be willing to listen and leand a helping hoof.

Read and find out.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 5 )

This a pretty good story, so I will be following it.
Yes, some things need a bit of work, but it's okay otherwise.

One question, though: If this is an in-progress story (as indeed it seems to be), then why is it marked as "Complete"?
Seems like the "Incomplete" tag needs to be on it, rather than the "Complete" one.

This story has some promise so I'll see where this goes

Well thank you for those comments. oh and also thank you for pointing out the complete story error

" Now's our chance!" Maud yelled.

Who are you and what have you done with Maud

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