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Anubis Nox


An average person who does art and used to/still writes somewhat. Nox is my Tulpa.

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Peter Griffin is momentarily sucked into Equestria right when hes about to 'get even' with the chicken. When Celestia doesn't allow him pay to for his damages and inconvience he gets into a fight with Celestia. Teen for blood and language. I do not own any of the characters in this story. SHOULD BE TAKEN AS A JOKE AND NOT A LEGIT STORY.

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Peter Griffin go down to the store to get a loaf of bread and some milk, and GUESS who was THERE? That PONY from MLP, remember? And then they FOUGHT and it was FUUUNY!

It's terrible. Just some mates wanted me to try this so I rushed it :/

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I cant talk tho, my fim fiction is terrible >.>

I am surprised that Celestia didn't use an actual spell in Peter Griffin.
She could easily immobilize him with her magic from the start or even just put the fat man to sleep. Celestia even cast some kind of bolt spell or laser at Queen Chrysalis.
Also thinking of the cunning and wisdom Celestia has, she would not get into the position in the first place to fight Peter.

Although this is in character for Peter, this is completely out of Character for Princess Celestia, even if she was teleported into the Family Guy Universe.
Even if Celestia was in the Family Guy Universe (in some sort of parody) and was under the effect every Character in that Universe eventually goes though there be more on her part than Teleportation and Telekinesis.

I am surprised that Celestia didn't use an actual spell on Peter Griffin.
She could easily immobilize him with her magic from the start or even just put the fat man to sleep. Celestia even cast some kind of bolt spell or laser at Queen Chrysalis.
It is like seeing Joe from Family Guy not getting mad than shooting someone with his gun.
Also thinking of the cunning and wisdom Celestia has, she would not get into the position in the first place to fight Peter.

Although this is in character for Peter, this is completely out of Character for Princess Celestia, even if she was teleported into the Family Guy Universe.
Even if Celestia was in the Family Guy Universe (in some sort of parody) and was under the effect every Character in that Universe eventually goes though there be more on her part than Teleportation and Telekinesis.

Do not get me started what was wrong with Princess Luna.

926561 you try and hit something that is highly resistant to magic but i know what you mean and i shall repeat this. It isnt meant to be taken as a proper story only as a joke. But thanks for the comment nonetheless :pinkiehappy:

As much as I enjoyed it, and it did make me laugh out loud, I can't really vote it up. But since I enjoyed it, I can't vote it down. This is one of those rare occasions where I leave it as neutral. If you get it proof-read, ping me, and I'll give it another read.

926583 Lol k. Ty for reading though :)

Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiitttt i should go to bed. I got work tommor- ah um today oops. Soz if I don't answer for 9 hours, but it's 1 am here so night.

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Haven't you heard?
The bird is the word

"get even with the chicken"

hmm not sure if it would be more brutal or funnier if you used Scootaloo.

I laughed, could picture the entire fight in my mind.

926623 (Rainbow Dash puts a revolver in her mouth)

You're right, this is shit.

But it is BEAUTIFUL shit and I loved every second of it :rainbowlaugh:

I must do a video reaction about this! :rainbowwild:

Lol im up now but like

i said this is to be taken as a joke not seriously
926648 LOL
926859 lol???
926894 trolol? must see this.
926683 lol
926680 :P

Pinkie Pie: Hey, have you heard this awesome new song?!
Rainbow Dash: NOOO!

928669 I'l PM you the link as soon as i finish it! :twilightsmile:

Oh my gawd, this was hilariously silly :rainbowlaugh:
I might do a live Skype reading of this just for the hell of it sooner or later :rainbowwild:
And LOL @ the idea of Scootaloo being the Chicken!

931424 Was it actually that funny???
926648 Yeh must say that it would've been hilarious if I made Scootaloo the chicken but since it's your idea i'm not going to do it.

932588 It had me in stupid giggles the whole time...and the comments just about killed me.
So yes, it was funny :rainbowwild:

932787 Yay, I still could've though I could've done better yeah but the comments are definitely funny
:scootangel:
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Chicken, GET IT NOW BEFORE IT RUNS AWAY

Lol it's not getting any awards but I liked it.

Does anyone think I should try to make another story, or chapter to get this story or other one further. I've found plenty of mistakes in this one which could easily make this story 20% cooler if I got rid of them but that would be screwing with the story which I don't want to.:derpytongue2: SO I'm thinking if I should just make another one (maybe based of him coming back here to fight the mane six this time?) to make up for this piece of crap one here.

LOL i laughed so hard in the end:rainbowlaugh:

2317764 You read a class A piece of shit, of a story I made on 5 hours sleep in under two hours.

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Frodo:I am the Lord of the Wings

That was awesome! I am so making this happen, one sec. *snap*

2848431 Lol, I see what you did there. If it interests you I have had a sequel almost finished, just haven't added the ending lol. Thanks for the awesome!

2851530 I look forward to said sequel, mostly because I want to see peter griffin or stewie beat the shit out of those ponies. I have to vent my anger from Diaries of a Madman somewhere, and this is where! Well, that and the one time I put the castle crashers knights in equestria... That was fucking funny.

2851538 Also, I forgot, this was so awesome i had my bro discord read it. He only said that making gangam style and harlem shake popular was funnier.

2851543 :D Probably is! I wrote this just as I started writing, in approx two hours.... I was not proud of this XD Buuuuut I'm hoping the sequel can be better.

2851547 how can you not be proud, this wasnt supposed to be serious, it was supposed to be hilarious, and if me and my brother, both a gods of chaos in sense find it funny, I am pretty damn sure you succeeded.

Oh sweet Faust:facehoof::rainbowlaugh: I didn't even need to read the story to already figure this out and I still lmfao :trollestia::rainbowlaugh:

I wonder how the Mane Six are going to deal with Peter next time he visits Equestria.

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