The light of the Traveller

This was the darkest point for Mankind. The last City on Earth has fallen and the Red Legion trapped the Traveller. A Guardian who was on Ghauls ship at this point got kick off it. As he tried to Short Teleport, a last light burst from the Traveller washed over him, sending him to Equestria, a peaceful Planet lightyears away from Earth. But not to far from Cabal systems.

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1 The Red Legion (Prologue) · 30th Aug 2017 · 1,020 words
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2 Equestria · 10th Sep 2017 · 2,306 words
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3 Ikarus IV · 18th Sep 2017 · 1,317 words
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4 Things getting worse · 3rd Oct 2017 · 1,093 words
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5 Orobas Centaro and a dead Friend · 5th Oct 2017 · 1,431 words
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6 Preparation · 9th Oct 2017 · 1,039 words
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7 Infiltration · 12th Oct 2017 · 1,097 words
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8 End of an Empire and a new home · 14th Oct 2017 · 1,708 words
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MLP_Thundersky

MLP_Thundersky #1 · Sep 11th, 2017 · · · 2 Equestria ·

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Dragonrim

Dragonrim #2 · Sep 18th, 2017 · · · 2 Equestria ·

История была великолепна! Мне нравилось развитие персонажа и то, как вы переходили между сценами! Ваше описание сделало меня счастливым, и я надеюсь, что вы преуспеете! Удостоверьтесь, что вы не ставите соус в белье!

MLP_Thundersky

MLP_Thundersky #3 · Sep 18th, 2017 · · · 3 Ikarus IV ·

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Sorry, but I don't speak Russian, only German and English

Boof Man

Boof Man #4 · Oct 12th, 2017 · 1 · · 7 Infiltration ·

Please continue

MLP_Thundersky

MLP_Thundersky #5 · Oct 12th, 2017 · · · 7 Infiltration ·

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Sure

ShadedTz

ShadedTz #6 · Oct 15th, 2017 · · · 8 End of an Empire and a new home ·

Great story!

MLP_Thundersky

MLP_Thundersky #7 · Oct 15th, 2017 · · · 8 End of an Empire and a new home ·

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KyloRen

KyloRen #8 · Oct 22nd, 2017 · 2 · · 2 Equestria ·

It is an interesting concept but at least for me it feels too rushed based on the first two chapters. I also feel that the way the guardian acts especially the warlock class you chose, seems to be a bit off due to the reaction to new location and new non-aggressive species seen. I say this because the warlocks in universe are scholars so to me it does not make any sense for a warlock to act hyper aggressively to a new situation. For me warlocks are strategists which bide their time to get to understand the situation better before acting. Even so it is always nice to see more destiny stories being made.

deadmemes

deadmemes #9 · Jan 7th, 2019 · · · 2 Equestria ·

SUNSHOT! SUCK IT, DUDE!

Also, if I did a Destiny/MLP crossover, I would cheat the system and add Trinity Ghoul as Kinetic, Sunshot (IT’S OP DEAL WITH IT) as Energy, and Whisper of the Worm as Heavy. No f’s given about the armor.

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