You never go anal to vag. Dude that's a quick pathway to a right nasty infection.

Well, this quickly became one of my favorite stories. Well done!

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Yeah, I sorta fucked up on that. I was lost in the momentum of writing the sex scene that i didn't think to break the flow of the scene with Octavia or Harold taking notice of that fact. Thank you for the criticism though.

Is it wrong that I enjoy the YouTube video more?

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Yeah no problem.

8395081
Nah, It aint. Not everyone is going to like a particular story, though.

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Btw, I'm working on a story-heavy Sunset Shimmer clopfic. Be on the watch for that.

This version of Octavia sounds like she should bring a towel with her to sit down on when she's around her lover, because she sounds like she has a problem with moisture.

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As I said in the end notes, I decided to portray her as a walking embodiment of lust, fueled by libido in light of her reserved nature as she was normally depicted as in the show, movies, and fan animations. I thought for quite a while about it and I figured out something creative like that to hammer in that point.

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That doesn't sound healthy.

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Nonetheless, I tried something new with that in contrast with how I usually wrote scenes like that for the sake of being creative where the protagonist kinda but didn't see it coming. Also, The musically-induced orgasms part was put in there for absurdity's sake and for laughs.

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Ok.

huh.

"Okay, Where is that recipe for chicken parmesan? Nanananananana- There it is!"

*Buzzer noise* I'm sorry, the correct answer is: BATMAN!

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Ah, okay.

This actually wasn’t bad.