Lost Tapes (Equestria Files)

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Geeknerd

Geeknerd #1 · Aug 27th, 2017 · · · Ahool ·

This show was lit years ago, thanks for bringing it back in some form, even if it's written

The Avenger

The Avenger #2 · Aug 27th, 2017 · · · Ahool ·

Just like an actualy episdoe of Lost Tapes. Think I’ll be traking this.

Coconut of Doom

Coconut of Doom #3 · Aug 27th, 2017 · · · Ahool ·

Well then, here we have a crossover with a child's show and a show that caused me great nightmares and nighttime paranoia.

I like it.

Titan Commander Sebaste

Titan Commander Sebaste #4 · Aug 27th, 2017 · · · Ahool ·

I would suggest getting an editor, but other than that, I think that this has potential...

JustSomeGuy112

JustSomeGuy112 #5 · Aug 27th, 2017 · · · Ahool ·

This chapter had a few mistakes, but is was pretty good nonetheless. I look forward to the next update.

knightcommander

knightcommander #6 · Aug 28th, 2017 · 1 · · Ahool ·

Two things.

1. Your dialogue needs some work. Add some things in their to better capture the characters' emotions.

2. You're rushing parts of the fic. I understand you're basing it on a old 30-minute found footage TV show, but if you want to place us in the scene you gotta draw it out.

But you've got me intrigued. I was a fan of this show (still am) and I'm following this with interest.

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