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Waxworks


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woah that mind control at the end was a great twist to what normally happened with the sex ahd murder

Some time later, Vinyl pulled herself to a sitting position and looked around her studio. Wires were unplugged and strewn everywhere. Her chair was upended with the pen stabbed into the back of the headrest, and one of her monitors had a writing program open with gibberish mashed into it.

Maybe it's just me being extremely niche, but being a music producer myself made that last sentence a bit confusing to read.
In music production lingo, monitors are the speakers in the studio, used for precision mixing and mastering, so at first I thought she had scribbled a something on the speakers, haha! :rainbowlaugh:
But I think you meant the computer screen?

I just finished the story, and I must say I'm impressed with the writing.
This is a story about the daily life of a DJ, who sees what she calls the Blue Ghost, and goes out of her way just to see it again and know its messages. Definitely a nice story!

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Aye. Computer monitor. I don't produce music, so I've never heard monitor used in that way before.

Nice! Very nice! It was an awesome touch with the brainwashing at the ending.

I know some peeps seem to think that the crowd is mind controlled or brainwashed. I’m pretty sure that the Blue Ghost is an AI, and now it’s been transferred into those partygoers. Fun.

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