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"Look, sister—a bowl full of candy!" said a dark blue alicorn in a pink tutu.
"Strangely, it’s unguarded" said a white alicorn in a chicken suit.
As they approached the candy bowl they saw a strange note which read Warning, this candy bowl is protected by a dragon! Take the candy at your own peril!
The blue alicorn approached the candy bowl and took two pieces of candy, foolishly ignoring the warning.
Just then, a massive red dragon popped out of the bushes and attacked the duo with his sticky-string breath!
"Let’s get out of here, Luna!" shouted the chicken princess alicorn.
"I’m right behind you, Celestia!" responded Luna, the ballerina princess.
After the escape, they retreated into the streets of Ponyville. In the background, there were giggles of delight and the sounds of pies being thrown in the distance.
"Uck, I’m going to need a—what do you call it—a spa day? Sister?" asked Luna, pulling at some of the sticky sting in her mane.
Celestia giggled.
"Yes sister, tomorrow we will have a spa day" responded Celestia.
Just then, an earth-pony filly in a clown costume and a unicorn filly in a Princess Dress walked up, both cemented with sticky string.
"You two went to Scoot—wait, princesses‽ Why are you here and why are you wearing that?" asked the filly clothed in a clown costume.
"We may have lost a bet to Cadence and Twilight" Luna responded sheepishly.
"Oh. Well, as long as you are here, may I ask you for a favor? It’s about this snowball fight that Twilight does with us every year" inquired the unicorn filly.
Back at the dragon’s lair, the full reality of what the dragon did set in.
"I sprayed Luna and Celestia with sticky-string" said the dragon, to himself.
He then ran off to apologize to the two sisters.
"…and that’s how you do the silent-contact spell" Luna explained.
"Thanks, Luna!" exclaimed the unicorn filly.
"Princesses!" screamed a running dragon.
He stopped running and started apologizing.
"I’m so sorry for spraying you highnesses with sticky string! Please don’t punish me!" he begged.
"Citizen, it’s alright. It’s just a part of the fun" Celestia said while offering a comforting wing.
"Thank you! You’re too kind, your majesties" he stated.
"May I ask just one question before I go?" he pondered, trembling in place.
"What is it?" Luna responded.
"Why are you two wearing those costumes?"
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Short but good.
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I'm glad to hear you liked it!
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I love the use of the interrobang here.
But parts of it seemed a little disjointed. I would have preferred a break to clearly mark the scene change between the dragon’s lair and Ponyville.
Also, I’m not sure the Princesses would regard any dragon but Spike a “citizen.” Dragons tend to live on the fringes of Equestria and likely don’t regard themselves as subject to the Princesses’ rule. Even the one that appeared in “Dragonshy” wasn’t convinced to go on the fact that Celestia and Luna wanted them out for the safety of Equestria.
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You can thank my editor, Tranquil Night , for the use of the interrobang.
Thank you for the criticism. There are few things I want to explain.
This chapter was meant as bonus chapter and a Interquel to the main story. It was not a real dragon. In the main story it was established that Land Rusher, an earth pony who was in a dragon costume, was hiding in the bushes to prank anyone who dares "Steal" from his "Candy Horde".
"As they were walking out, they were both scared by a red dragon that popped out of the bushes as they were walking away.
"Raawr!" roared the red dragon as Rainbow Dash immediately grabbed Scootaloo’s hoof and kept her close. She then flared her wings up to fly both of them away.
Scootaloo screamed and held on to Rainbow Dash as she thought they were both about to take off. She even started to flutter her wings in synchronism with Rainbow Dash.
Then, the dragon started to laugh. He pulled off his costumed head and showed that he was none other then a red pony named Land Rusher, Scootaloo’s father.
"I got you guys good, didn’t I?", asked Land Rusher.""-
A not so spooky adventure
It was stated, before Apple bloom realised she was talking to Luna and Celestia, that they went to Scootaloo's house.
""You two went to Scoot—wait, princesses‽ Why are you here and why are you wearing that?" asked the filly clothed in a clown costume. "
It wasn't a real "dragon’s lair".
But yes, I will be putting in a seen break to make the story flow better.
Cute little story! Found you through some of your commissions via Derpibooru.
Slice of Life and fluff really is the lifeblood of this fandom. I haven't written about Dash and Scootaloo since 2013, but I still enjoy reading about them. Best sisters of G4.
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