Time has forgotten him, but when Luna returns from the moon, he comes back to Equestria. What zany adventures will this ancient being get into once he returns to a peace-loving land?
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HAH! Applejack figured out how to out maneuver Celestia and I bet Aspect is loving it.
All or nothing, brah. All or nothing.
soooo he took both? also trollestia got trolled
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With Applejacks Help no less.
dragon shy nice one of my favorite episodes tho i oh so hope that palkia and dialga make a show tho that's just my personal head cannon firing all of the amuniton
I am quite enjoying this story, would love to read one of Aspect before the Mane 6, how he created all his "kids" and who they actually are... young Tia and Luna, I think it'd be great! Hell, you could make it as a sort of side story, a way of having Aspect tell the Mane 6 about his life in story form.
8137732 Look, just take the damn cigar, thats all I ask of you.
Nice
im a say it, kinda boring to read what happened in episodes we already watched (multiple times) regardless of the point of view or any other additives
*snrks*
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I'm sadly going to have to agree on that. Especially when the outcome and events hardly change.
Hopefully someone else gets this joke, but as I was reading who he had fought, my brain thought up a phrase when I read he had battled king charlatan. "Apparently being beaten by Aspect is what seperates a charlatan from a Charligain."
Luna: And that surprised you how?
Well thats just rude
I had to bite my knuckle to keep from laughing out loud
It's really hard not to read that as mockery, because yeah, I can reeeeally feel the emotion there.
This story already feels like it's going to happen on fast-forward while catering to all the worst HIE clichés, no offense. I'm not sure I'll be able to make it through half a million words of that, but maybe it catches its stride later.
A shame this seems to just be a retelling of MLP, not an original plot. I hope that changes when I read further...
Celestia thinks, "Touche father. Touche."
It's true
Also, Twilight, dragons are just as much sapient creatures as ponies and I doubt you categorize yourself as an animal, not to mention Spike
In a way I suppose
I love how he signed off his letter with "Your move".
Although it has been written for a long time, but you showed interest at the beginning. But seriously, it was possible to create an emotional drama, what did the main character go through and how does he feel now, after many years of separation from his daughters? I didn't see anything, although there could have been more. Could reveal the hero of his side as a wise, mischievous, stubborn adventurer who does stupid things, accepts an idiot loser, unknowingly plays on others and implements his plan three steps ahead. And at the same time, it hides something that only close friends and daughters can see, namely, a tortured soul who has lived for many centuries and has not gone crazy with time. Here it was possible to embody and show the character, lifting the veil of mystery, who he was in the past and became from the moment he drank water from the fountain of youth. But here you will not change anything, except to read on. Who knows if we'll see a trilogy or not.