Time has forgotten him, but when Luna returns from the moon, he comes back to Equestria. What zany adventures will this ancient being get into once he returns to a peace-loving land?
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I’m glad you’re rewriting this, it is most definitely not up to par with a shifting Melodies as of right now
Well...admitally its your choice, but to be honest? What you and Aus made? wasn't half bad. yes there were a few hiccups...but that's part of life in a sense.
what...cancel and re work it. why? i think its amazing as is and shouldnt need changing at all.
but i guess as its your story and its not to your liking then you do what you need to do.
just please dont take too long, ive loved the weekly updates on this story as one of the only ones in my favourites that does anymore.
if you are going to completly rework it could i ask you to keep this story up and make the rework another story but link it in this one please. ive loved going back to the beginning of this and reading it all over again and i would hate to see it go.
if not please reply and let me know so i can download it to read when im at work and bored on break. thanks
Nnnnnnooooooooooo, it has been going so well too! I guess as long as it was your decision to rewrite it and not because of the haters, then I shall forgive you for canceling this story.
What... cancelling this story... I have been loving this story so far... I mean sure, it had a rocky start, but you have improved. I often feel like quitting something and starting over is too often giving up, as I used to do that a lot, so I guess it feels a bit personal. I looked at the blog, and I say, there will always be those who dislike it. I feel like the thing about those like/dislike ratios and views, just writing for them... isn't being true to yourself. I write because I enjoy doing it, and I want to share it. The most I ever gotten in terms of comments are indifferent comments when I ask for opinions on them, so I just do it because I enjoy it.
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Agreed, this story isn't perfect but its definitely one of my top 5 favorite on here.
You better put up a chapter with a link to the new version when it comes out. Im gonna be pissed if you don't.
Ignore the haters and keep going. I doubt any of them have a story at nearly 1000 upvotes.
Nuuuuuu I like this story, too many I've read have gotten canceled and are being rewritten. Man, and just when it was getting into season 3, too!
Why are you cancelling this? This story is great, and I look forward to reading this every week. This is becoming one of my favorite stories on this site.
*Changelings
Also, I like this story and think it's good, but you do you, my dude.
Family's here
What he said
Wait... "Mrs" Xiphos
Yeah that's actually both a real possibility and a problem
Aww ..... if that is your descicion i will respect it ....... And look forward to see what you come up with in the future
Canceling and redoing this? Since when? Did I miss a memo or something?
DO NOT CANCEL I LOVE THIS!!!!!
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They're canning the story and redoing ah believe cause of the criticism it has gotten more and more recently, from the Video game/tv super powers he has, to the almost rapey way Chris dealt with Twilight, to his rampant Mary sue powers and behavior, and the more and more abundance and reliance on sex scenes in the story.
Least thats what I have seen talked about a lot.
While I along with many others are sad over this just know that you have our full support no matter what you decide to do. And from all of us we thank you for this amazing story, it was one hell of a ride.
Keep going. This is a gem and always will be. You don't need to rework anything. The haters will always hate. This story is an inspiration to me and many others. Please don't cancel.
Especially now that Megan and the other world is there. Hasbroverse is awesome! Now imagining the Cybertronians getting involved. Celestia x Optimus Prime OTP.
I'd rather you just keep going and maybe go back and rewrite those earlier chapters at some point. I agree the story has problems but after 500k words I hate the idea of going all the way back to the start when there is no guarantee that we'll end up with a better story.
why do i think meg mentioned the transformers?
Wait, WHAT?!?! Cancel???! But it's so good.... I mean, I understand that it would technically be temporary so you can remake it....
Ohhh.. I just hope it's fast like a band-aid. I can't take the suspense.
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I also sense an alternate Hasbroverse.
Like all the others said, keep the story going, it's an great read, and far better then most stories in this website and many others websites I been to!~
Well slightly upset to see you cancel it, and will most likely never read the rewrite as i just cant read any story twice. Maybe ill look into it when its done. But good luck.
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i was thinking the exact same thing.
Don't cancel it... Post it all, mark as complete and post the rewrite as an AU new story please...
It's so sad to see a good story be scrapped because some morons whine about it...
you don't need to cansel the story you can allways make an difrent one pararell with this one as an filler for background or shus i have red an few storys that duse that
Please don't scrap it! I love the story as it is! I is somthing I read the instant it updates, it makes me happy when i see it update.
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who cares about some other story? I may not know what story your talking about but it has NOTHING to do with this story unless im missing some huge thing, so unless i am, Shut it.
Say whhaaaaaaaaaaaaaat
I am not going to voice my opinion on your decision. It is your story after all, not the critic's.
If you think you can make a better version of this, go for it, I am more than willing to read them.
However, I must ask you not to delete this version of the story so that I could come back and read them in the future. I really appreciate the entertainment you've provided so far.
And I like how your Nightmare had her own little revelation. Guess what the canon's Nightmare missed was the touch of family.
At this point you have 29 comments and only one thinks that the story should be taken down and rewritten. The rest of us agree that it is your story and you will do what you wish. However I would like to come down firmly on the side of those that think that it should be left up and the rewrite be posted to stand or fall on its own merits.
An example or what I mean, I have built several muzzle loading rifles. When I talked to a friend of mine, who is a much better gunsmith than I, about stripping one of my first attempts he recommended that I not do it as I could look back at it and see the little spots where I goofed, things that I would now do differently and the several (to Me) glaring errors I made. To wipe out the tracks you have made, story, physical object , whatever just does not seem right to me. Good luck with whatever you do.
I will be honest and blunt. I'm not happy at all that you are deciding to cancel this story just to rewrite. I personally think you should keep this story going to test the waters for new ideas of where the story will go while you work on a side version for your rewrite until you caught up with where this one will no longer be ahead of the rewrite and allow this one to end as one version of the "A Tale of Balanced Aspect, Foster Father for the Princesses" and the other can then become "The True Tale of Balanced Aspect, Foster Father for the Princesses".
Honestly I like the idea of a rewrite but that's probably not a surprise to anyone here.
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It's another story by the same duo with a few similarities to this one and arguably their best work in my opinion. Simply put it's the main reason I started following this account.
I enjoy this story alot but if you do the rewrite i suggest starting with a flash back to the night and the events that caused him to leave maybe make it a dream sequence but either way i will support the decision you guys chose because this is truely my fave story on this site
Ooo, a rewrite
awwww. A canceation, but a rewrite as well! hopefully it will blow this version out of the water. also this will give you a chance to make sure that the begining chapters flow smoother. Also thank you for the consistant updates
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First off, lose the fucking attitude, you're on a brony fanfiction site, You can drop the act of being superior to me.
Second, The story in question is a story that he written before that was better written plot wise and Character wise, thats why I make a reference to it, Also one of the main characters is in this new story,
Third off, If you read my comment, I don't hate this story, I just wish it was up to par with his past ones
I'm going to be sad seeing this version of the story come to an end, but you should do what you feel is right
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I apologise, I didn't think at all when I commented. But I believe every story shouldn't be judged by another, even if its by the same person, im sorry that I lost myself while typing.
Just rewrite the earlier chapters bro. Dont can the whole thing.
So you stop after the ending of season 2 and began again before reaching Twilight ascension? The story is very good, I don't see why need to re-do it.
I'm against cancelling, but if you do please do tell how it should continue and end, please. And, on the next one, maybe don't make it sound like ponies are the one true race and everyone else should suffer if needed be for them to prosper, for that's how Christopher sounds. There's plenty of intelligent species in that world, it's not harmonious to put one above the others, not on the slightest.
Also reducing on the bullshit power levels might be good. There can be powerful characters, the main one can be one of them, but the ease he solves things can be off-putting.
That being said, this story still has plenty of good points that don't need a rewrite to shine through. It's still your choice, but an unnecessary one, I'd say.
You're really going to leave us with that? Cruel and unusual punishment.
Fucking Christ, that gives me chills. "For the Greater Good" has been used to justify all sorts of atrocities and tyrannies throughout history. Genocide in the millions has been done "for the greater good". And the word "remove" in conjunction... I wonder if she's going to annex the Sudetenland when she gets back home?
Fuck, man, maybe you SHOULD rewrite this if that's the kind of thing we have to look forward to.
No plz no don't cancel it is too good....ah oh well......i just hope the re-write doesn't change much of the story....maybe if you have him take more than a sip of the fountain
the hell does Aus mean?
Please don't cancel or rewrite this wonderful story. It's perfect the way it is.
Don't cancel!
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Oh... now that I think about it.. should have been obvious... sorry Aus
When you do get going on the rewrite, PLEASE upload a link in an update to this side. I want to keep supporting whatever you do, but I will totally miss the rewrite without the link.
I dont want it cancelled or rewritten! Its a great story just as it is!