Time has forgotten him, but when Luna returns from the moon, he comes back to Equestria. What zany adventures will this ancient being get into once he returns to a peace-loving land?
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Yay~! That was adorable!
Bonnie and Midnight getting cute with Realm was the cutest thing. Their happiness was amusing to see.
I thought Dashie running off would have ended horribly. I'm happy it didn't.
A lovely fluff chapter.
Ah, I see you are a plort farmer aswell.
Yes they do, their family practically runs the world, or at least keeps it from turning into a wasteland... that and their father/grandfather/guardian loves them all to bits
That filly has no survival instincts
Well in a roundabout way she is responsible for Nightmare's current condition as a flesh and blood pony
Yes, yes you are
And we are going to love you being a part of it
This chapter...I like it ANOTHER *smashes phone onto the ground*
I highly doubt 3 is the highest number of necklaces Aspect has seen together at once.
Loved this chapter!
Magnificent chapter! Romantic, sweet, and so much wonderful fluff in all the right places. I really am looking forward to what comes next!
Wednesday is my favourite day of the week because of the consistency of your updates, i probably didnt catch em all but a few things here
Did you mean most beautiful or some other descriptor?
Fiancées im guessing
Now i could be wrong here as im not perfect but shouldnt this be something like ask for her help or ask her for help, i feel like its missing a word
Two chapters in a row with no explicit clop scene! YAY!
Nice
You got Rainbow’s reaction just as I thought she might act. Good chapter sir.
Loved the mommies gushing, and twilight's snark-and-run at the end
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Much clop.
There are Orks in canterlot?!!
Oh, that was just too frign' cute. All of it. And specially hilarious was Twilight's reaction.
But yeah, getting married by the princess of love would be awesome.
Slain by snuggles..... i cant stop laughing a sincere thank you for that
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One of the hardest ways to avoid the slaying...
The snuggles are hard to avoid...
I think you meant "dessert" as the last word here.
I think you meant "fiances". This is normally a word that is not plural so the autocorrect might have screwed it up.
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Well, there was barely any clop in this chapter, besides referencing it. Having clop every chapter actually kind of made it harder to enjoy the story, as that part started to feel the same after awhile. To me, I usually prefer a few or several sfw chapters between the nsfw chapters.
Much better. This is what I wanted in this story from the beginning. We don't need clop every paragraph of every chapter.
Very tasteful. The story alludes to sexy times without actually going into detail. If NSFW scenes were edited down to something resembling this, that would be marvelous. The story would get heated, the readers teased, but the sex would be left to our own imaginations where we could take things as far as we desire before returning to the actual story.
If things continue like this, I'll be sticking around to the end and I'll certainly be looking forward to future updates.
a mothers love is a powerful thing with what my mom went through i know from experience
“i....its not like i like you or anything b....baka”
Not bad so far, but could use more conflict.
Let me elaborate, seeing as your keeping somewhat cannon to the show its predictable in that aspect but since there's only been a series of small conflicts so far its gotten a little stale and even though it's building up for the hole changling invasion I'm predicting that the conflict itself will be concluded within one chapter, mabey half a chapter.
What my point is, is that you should have been foreshadowing for a much bigger more complex conflict to bring the story to a grand peek and conclusion, but it's not there and if it is its way too subdued.
Congrats Christopher Rainbow Bon-Bon and Midnight on your engagement
I’m going to guess discord is thinking about retirement with how much chaos this one family is causing