Time has forgotten him, but when Luna returns from the moon, he comes back to Equestria. What zany adventures will this ancient being get into once he returns to a peace-loving land?
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I just finished rereading the last chapter then this popped in my feed
Fucking make realm older all fucking ready you fucking tease
Tia is gonna kill him
How big of a meltdown would Twilight have if filly Tia and Lulu called her mom?
NOOOOOOO! MY SHIP SUNK!
God if Twi became part of Aspects herd... Celestia calling the filly she raised like her own child mom? Awkward. As. Fuck.
That end part took me completely by surprise...
I was not expecting that at all!
I will NOT lie I am still hoping something happens that lets realm and twilight get together even if they do have to wait 6 years.
Realm is getting a raw deal here if you think about it. Alicorn or not, its still ruff. Before the big sleep he could not get the one thing he wanted cause of reasons, and now afterwards still cant have what he seeks because of age and laws. Not to mention it dont help that after the moment he has, and takes the highground and tries to be respectable, the one he wants and cares for listens to him, leaves, and does what he said to do despite him being only a few doors away from said event, all the while this is going on, you could hear him die on the inside.
.....
.....really says something about the quality of a story that gets you wrapped up into something like this dont it.
Love this story to death, but that whole twilight ending has just fucking killed me. Not how I wanted twilights love life to go down.
hmm while i'm all for twi getting in a relationship...aspect got enough mares dont he?
My first comment ever on this site.
i think this was just a one time only thing for Twilight.
Realm could have his age-up via Starswirl's Time travel spell. What season and episode number was that anyway? I don't think it would hurt to move the timeline around a bit, Maybe have Realm show up at Cloudsdale when Starlignt (if she is a thing in this) shows up and stays behind to make sure everything runs its coarse.
Speaking of Starlight, would her cutie mark spell even work on Aspect's human or other forms, let alone his rune magic?
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Not with how badly she wants grandchildren. (as alluded to earlier this chapter.) What would be funny is Twilight freaking out over Celestia being her step-daughter!
You know, a dad taking his kid's crush for himself feels really creepy. It almost makes Twilight compensate for not getting Realm by getting into a relationship with the colt's adopted father.
Ew.
Oh~ That was fun.
I love the Teaching Aspect. Twilight is such a good student.
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Heh somehow I think there is going to be a big twist in the near future. Or past, somehow I feel like time travelling will be involve.
Super not a fan of if Twilight joins the herd.
At least in your other work they seemed to work to it more and she seemed (to me) to be more generally receptive, and personally, even if it would take six years, I was REALLY fond of the idea of Twiligt Waiting for Realm.
Poor colt has been getting his shit kicked in lately with jokes that I don't feel deserved and take things too far and now his dad is going to be bucking the mare he really wanted?
That's tough man.
No.
You stop that.
You put realm and twilight back together.
You put that thing back where it came from or so help me.
.....Add Twilight to the harem permanently please!!!!!
Others have said it better, but: Dude. Why. Twilight better not be a permanent addition, the herd was ridiculous enough as-is, and virtually everyone was rooting for Realm and her. Aspect's point that he is forever a hormonal teenager is right - one mare was fine, two (especially with one being a main character) was definitely pushing it, the third I don't really care about - but TWILIGHT!? Looks like you decided to jump the shark and dive off the ship before you dropped a fucking bridge on any chance of Realm getting a happy ending. You have him be considerate and THIS is what you give him? Twilight better not stay and Aspect, your overpowered, unlimited-positive-personality traits, ultra-suave, Gary Stu, self-insert character better finally get chewed out for something without lording his 'superiority' over everyone and being unreasonably graceful, always backed up by some arcane, eclectic, draconic, Byzantine 'logic'. This is really kind of a shit show, and you ruined one of the more believable characters.
#GiveRealmABreak
Yggdrasil: Hmmm.... maybe I need to do something for my little brother. Hopefully, Tia still kept every journals Starswirl wrote.
Aw, I liked the thing Twi and Realm had going on. Won't this make Realm resentful of his father to know that his with the mare that he loves? I mean, what, will he get sloppy seconds with Twilight when he comes of age?
I still hope for Realm and Twilight to be together in the future. Maybe with Cherylee being a lover to Twily during those years. Maybe even after too. People have long lives beyond the twenties, no need to be shy about loving then and not just now.
The only unfortunate part of that is the time scale of the story. Certainly we won't see them together unless time shenanigans happen. A possibility with a magical Starswirl painting on the loose, but still not guaranteed.
So lets pretend that Realm and Twilight do hook up later on... No matter how well it goes for them there will always be the fact that Twilight was once covered in Realms dads cum and eaten out by him. I can't even pretend to imagine a scenario where that's ok.
Aspect is really making up for the thousand years of virgnity isn't he?
This will certainly make a few waves if everyone else finds out, because frankly finding out your crush screwed your dad (and moms) seems like a little bit more reason for heartbreak, even if you still want her them to get someone their age when you still like them. And that's just Realm. Still, herds arent a new idea there so who knows how open they really are?
In my personal opinion, I read this story for the slice of life and romance, not the clop, even if it isn't actually badly written. I actually liked the Midnight scene as it was, but seeing Aspect go around like a rabbit in season just isn't my thing, so I just skip them.
NONONONO DO NOT LET HER TRY TO COOK
Like teacher , like student
Now you know how Velvet and Aspect feels
He does know how to compliment a mare
And that is why it works
Wait, what!?
Thanks Dash
Sounds like Twilight isn't the only one who needs some romance in her life
The end of this chapter makes me a little depressed , but i will not give up on the Twilight Realm ship so easily
This is bad. This is just fucking bad. I'm gone.
Gotta add my two bits...
Twilight + Aspect... LESS THAN 48 HOURS AFTER REALM BECOMES HEARTBROKEN OVER HER!!! Is SUPER super creepy and a complete dick move by Aspect.
I can get my head around the open sex relationship and the we're all consenting adults behind closed doors and we won't judge attitude.
What I can't get my head around is Aspect not TRULY considering Realm in all this.
Aspect KNOWS Realm was crushing on and possibly fully in love with Twilight.
He KNOWS Realm is heartbroken because the laws say he and Twilight can't be together and Realm is stallion enough to realize it would be unfair for Twilight to wait for him.
So his course of action was to allow the drunken and heartbroken (because Realm JUST "broke-up" with her because he wants her to be happy) mare that his SON was crushing on into his bed? The proper answer is "I'm not going to do that to my SON, Let's let one of the nice mares here escort you to a guest room."
And I don't remember if it's been explicitly stated in a previous chapter, but unless there's a magic sound ward on the room... Realm probably hears a LOT.
It was going so well.. then you gave Twilight a sex scene. Realm DID say he didn't care if she ends up screwing with his dad or something but REALLY? On the same day? Also Must EVERY chapter contain sex now?
I mean Sex every few chapters is fine but really?
well... great chapter IMHO
realm let her go, he understands the age barrier even that he is old he is a colt and the Twi need someone
Twi has 0 experience and used Aspect as a partner, yes it began due to her drinking (and aspect didn't use that)
i don't think she will be a permanent addition but i wouldn't mind her to be
Celestia will kill him
8661152 magic won't change the fact he is a colt
8661156 yes
8661177 epic meltdown
8661407 forget the father issue, he is a good stallion who take care of his mares
I didn't read the clop part, but I got the feeling that this was more of a "friendship with benefits" situation than Twilight joining the herd.
FRESH POTS!
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read it, you are missing on great clop wordz (i mean it, i put Thadius0 on the same level as Loyal)
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Father figure, in the end both he and realm know that he isn't he's father.
both know Twi deserves a good stallion, and both see that there isn't one in line... Aspect is a mare respecting stallion that doesn't force his way on Twi but lets her develop whatever will happen on her on pace.
8662942 your loss, don't see a problem with herds
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why? he had a mare, got another
then while drunk slept with a 3rd that ended up asking the herd alpha to join (no aspect)
now another mare asked to have "some fun" which he didn't do until she was in a state to be able to agree to anything
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I do see adopted parents as parents, but i don't combine family in things like this
he's son has a crush on a mare, mare and son knows it won't work
mare goes to father for comfort... I DONT SEE THE PROBLEM IN THIS, i don't accept the fact that people think its wrong, both are grownups and can decide what to do and who to fuck.
Realm on the other hand wants whats best for Twi and he in fact knows that his father is a good stallion who take good care of his mares (also keeps twi close to realm)
Kids can in life have a crush on their fathers mates, it happens... nothing new here
Aspect approaches it in attitude of "listen, you are a grown up mare and you have choices to make, they are your own and i don't have a say in it"
sorry but this is more or less my own personal life, my GF (more or less, it's complicated) was monogamist and because of me she is now polyamorous, you can have relationships with more than one person and it's ok, Aspect respects Twi's decision he didn't force himself on her, how is he the wrong side here?
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the different point here compare to a "your dad takes her as a girlfriend"
is that both realm and twi know that it can't work, it's not a secret crush or one sided feeling, both know it can't happen
and i do agree we have different set of values, i don't think he is wrong and again we don't have to agree on it all
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Sorry I'm a pathetic writer and have let this story and it's readers down....
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I do hope Twilight will take this a one-time thing as an outlet of her frustation. I really support Relm x Twilight since he really has good character and maturity in him. (unlike some orange pegasus) I even have a feeling that once Shining heard the situation, he may even approve Relm despite his age.
The way I see this situation would resolve would be something like this...
1) Discord got out and strike some deals with Aspect as part of his reformation plan. One of those would be aging Relm so that he would be 18 and spend his adult life. (got idea from Alicorn of Music by Snorting Gentleman)
2) Twilight ascend to an alicorn, which would allow her to wait as long as it take (and without anypony complain about it) for Relm to reach adulthood. Maybe Celestia send some of the original Starswirl's last journals for the picture one to study -- which accidentally include that unfinish one -- and Twilight stumble upon it by chance.
I really hope the author has some kind of plots (that better than mine) prepared to solve this love problem between Relm and Twilight in the future.
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Hey you're not a pathetic writer. This story is one of the best I've ever read on this website and you wrote something that ended up being disappointing to people that want to see twi and realm together. If there's one thing I've learned from reading is that you did this for a reason. I don't know how you and thadius write this together but I'm sure you have something planned that will explain why twi did what she did.
I just want to point out that they did not go all the way so it's possible that the twilight x realm ship has not yet sunk.
8664664 - heh.... funny thing. Thad told me the same thing. (And yes, we're writing this together. We've actually been best friends for years)
I do have plans for the nerdicorn. But's sorry to say she's not going to have an easy time anytime soon. Please hang in there, as I do have a plan that most should be happy with.