Time has forgotten him, but when Luna returns from the moon, he comes back to Equestria. What zany adventures will this ancient being get into once he returns to a peace-loving land?
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! TAKE THAT, PARASPRITE PEST! FEEL THE BUUUUUURN!
Mort? I thought you originally named him Thanatos.
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Can't wait to meet the rest of the kids
Any relation to Discworld's Apprentice to Death?
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Wait, what if Celestia got so ANGRY that she turned into her Nightmare Form, OH man I would love to see her go off on the Parasprites in that form, they would all be ash in 10 seconds flat.
8186460 I think the original Death, the one that Aspect defeated, was Thanatos. Mort is the one who was created from Thanatos.
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No, Thanatos is correct. Mort is probably just a nickname.
Oooooooh those bugs are going to have real bad sun burns
And somehow the parasprites burned down the town... Yes that's exactly how it happened
'Nuff said
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To dispel speculation:
The grim pony goes by many names. Thanatos, the Reaper, Mortal Coil. All in an effort to outwit one mare.
Granny Smith still scares the hay outta him...
The Battle of the Lost Larder, is a tale that shall live on in legend, where mare and stallion fought to the last bushel of hay.
And was lost.
8186629 She's the Betty White of that world
Did you take Mort from the story Mort Takes a Holiday? Or goes on Holiday, whatever it's called?
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If it was the case, then...
#R.I.PFillydelphia
Another good chapter.
I'm not sure All-caps works that well, makes it seem like Mort is yelling. Maybe try all Bold instead.
- Celestia remembers the Parasprites, this music playsi n the background.
- Her horn charges with Sunfire
At least that's how the anime version of that scene plays out, XD. Great chapter overall, Lyra is such a silly pony ^^
This is a really great chapter! Please keep it coming.
One notice - didn't agent Sweetie Drop get brief about her employer's foster father?
oh man this was something i was not expecting i love it XD
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Do we even know exactly how long her organization has been disbanded?
8187428 Come to think about it... Since it seems, in this story, Aspect has been the one who 'clean out' the Equestria's shadow, doesn't that mean it is unnecessary to have such as organization?
feel the burn you little pest.
a grate chapter love it.
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He has been gone for a thousand years of his own volition. Celly had to find a way to fill the hole he left behind somehow...
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This would seem to imply that she wasn't told anything about him.
Is... is Celestia going to eat them?
Words cannot fully capture my delight with this story. I really like the inclusion of gen 1 aspects since it gives a somewhat new tilt on things.
Curious if we'll find out what happened with the flutterponies eventually too. I know they were already mentioned but their fate was left to question...
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You'll get an answer.
Eventually.
Aus and I only recently wrote it, after all. So it might take a while to show up at the rate of one chapter a week.
I mistook that for an innuendo for a second. Cause what does a mare get when she's got an empty back?
Careful Sweetie Drops, you might actually blow your cover around the new guy
Anyone else read Mort's lines in Ian Richardson's voice?
Wowi great story so far...
Only critic i have is the last part where Celestia had her parasprite flashback where Christopher is called a Stallion, but in the first chapter celly and Lulu Dont recognize him in Pony form...
Thats it! you only have to replace Stallion with man... The rest was perfect great story...
J.
Mort's speech's formatting is FUBAR'ed in this chapter. Might wanna take a second look.
Half the Money will not be Spent on Battlefront 2's loot boxes.
Damn loot boxes
*led
Do you mean "do"?
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doesn't help a certain bored reaper keeps giving her a potion that adds another decade or two to her lifespan (with THE BIG GUY UPSTAIRS's permission of course). not mort btw.
>Lyra enters the fanfic
Lyra is so cute. I love her, even if she's a manic mare sometimes.
I see this fic starts right after Boast Busters, given the first episode taking place in this fic is Dragonshy. Ohhh, Trixie's return should be fun, then.
Bon Bon's special agent senses are being triggered.
RUN! SHE'S A COFFEE ADDICT BOMB!!!
Hah, death joke
Seems legit
Well you were largely responsible for the town's current state
That pun was... dead on arrival