Time has forgotten him, but when Luna returns from the moon, he comes back to Equestria. What zany adventures will this ancient being get into once he returns to a peace-loving land?
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welp, i didn't the Realm issue coming.....has he meet the CMC yet? i would to see more of school stuff
OH man, Realm and the CMC, if they were to work together I don't know how long until Ponyville would get blown up.
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Now I've got to say that this was a great chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next, just how many more chapters until the wedding chapter and will you also be doing the EQG movie's as chapters?
"Pinkie, enough with your tomfoolery! We need you for tomfoolery!"
I think that sums up Aspect wanting pinkie to cheer up Realm.
Still kind of waiting for the manure to hit the fan.
Celestia: ...this is the true face of my future 'Mom'? And how my father doing all this?!
Cadance: I need to give my grandfather some pointers in foursome~.
another masterpiece
Six years are a long time when you're twenty, an eternity when you're twelve... But not so much when you're thirty. I wonder if Realm will change his mind once Twilight gets her wings.
cool.
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It will only be a few short months before Twilight has her wings since with Season 4's premiere was a Year after Seasons 1 Premiere
Also, poor Realm! I really wish there were some exception made for the poor little guy...
She has built many a forts in her time
You're right, he probably already knows
This ship is just about to set Sail
She really should have seen that one coming.... now we just need a unicorn... oh Lyra
Well, Midnight is still in shape i see
I'm sure you do
She is not perfect, she puts on the appearance of perfection to make everypony feel safe
I stuck with this story for the longest time, mainly because I enjoyed the slice of life aspect, to it. There's this interesting world, with powers to maintain and represent aspects of the world. Forgotten magic, to be re-introduced, to the world. Likeable characters, drama, occasional action, character growth etc. But then there's this one thing, this horrible tendril, that keeps creeping in, and pulling me out of the story, and it's the clop. It feels like it keep popping up, and more frequently. I'm not against sex scenes, but the scenes have just felt, like they're there, cause clop. And they seem to go on, for too long. That's how it's been for me. for awhile, two stories a clop-fic and a slice of life, vying for attention.
I'm probably in the minority, and it's probably just my own preferences. But I just feel let down, maybe I had overly high expectations, due to the earlier parts of this story. But this tale isn't for me anymore, I hope your story does well, but this is where I stop reading. Good luck, I hope you manage to finish the story.
Ahhhhh Huston we have no problem.
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In before Alexander Anderson bursts through a wall ranting and raving about protestant bastards.
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I think it's more of a, "Pinkie, direct your tomfoolery to Realm ASAP."
So when is Midnight gonna bust out with Dragostea Din Tei?
Not yet, but i have hope
It's actually very possible that a lot of colts (and mares) have tried, but she has been completely ignorant of that they were trying to ask her out
The "Girls night out" is going to be hilarious
The kind of day of which he'd dreamed since he was... Well, not small exactly, but you get the idea.
Foreshadowing? It's at least a weird coincidence given how that day is going to be/was in the other timeline for Midnight.
Ah, right after I commented on how creepy the Twilight/Realm interactions we're getting you actually go shut them down. I really hope you don't change your mind again in later chapters.
That was a fun scene at the end; I hope we get to see more of Midnight outside of sex scenes. Ah! Speaking of her, it's not very good form to have so much foreign language in a story, even if it is just a google translate away. Since you apparently made Aspect able to understand all languages but not speak them (an ability which he definitely did not have not the first time they met hence the "Equestrian! Do you speak it?" bit that chapter, another inconsistency), then as a story from his viewpoint the language should be understandable. Perhaps some formatting to indicate a foreign language or including the translation in parenthesis or as part of the author's notes?
And I was a TwiRealm shipper as well.
I meant in the dating and cuddling style, you perverts.
I feel like their is to much sex in the story while once every couple chapters would be good but every chapter thats a little over board
Oh, I'll show you some scary butt fun~
Don't go giving Dissy any ideas now, darling
I'm not sure if I like Aspect's whole thing w 'forcing' his mares to beg for him to make a broodmare of them. I mean I get that it isn't that he actually is forcing them, but it just feels wrong for Aspect to be like that.
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They all have their kinks, I think that his is dominant/impregnation play or it's the fact that he's kinda stuck mentally at 18. Though I would wager it's a combination of both.