Can Mario Spin Jump off of Equestrian spells? Can he run up their cloud walls, let alone stand on their clouds in general? In this story Mario attempts to do things in Equestria that he could perform in the Mushroom Kingdom just to see if he can. More will be added as ideas come to me.
Shadestar used with permission from Sky Blue CMC.
Help with the first chapter and the First Person POV provided by Sky Blue CMC and lunarderpy1
Disclaimer: NO CHARACTERS WERE KILLED IN THE MAKING OF THIS STORY, THANKS TO THE HELP OF EVERYONE'S FAVORITE DOCTOR
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I love it! Bravo, Lucky!
8120517 Thank you.
Amazing
8120629 Thank you for thinking so. As I said in the author's notes, I decided to try something new and write in first person, so I didn't know how well it would turn out.
8120593 Glad you liked it.
8120642 (what i am about to say is a joke) Next Time: Can Mario get Sunset to visit Equestria
8120646 I'm not sure if he could. But if he tried he would want to make sure he doesn't get her or Celestia mad.
8120622 I honestly don't know how to respond to that. The fact that you think the writing turned out all right is amazing because this was my first attempt at first person (just looking at my other stories confirms that). Thank you wishing me luck, and good luck to you as well.
8120653 if he did try i am sure he could without making either more than maybe slightly annoyed
8120663 Probably, but Mario still wouldn't want to deal with what would probably be a human or pony version of the Angry Sun, a hard to avoid enemy in Mario 3.
8120672 maybe he could at least get sunset to send a message to tia
8120679 Maybe he can. I already have a far off chapter where Mario will try to teach Princess Twilight to type (as a reference to Mario Teaches Typing, one of those games that are commonly mocked for being mad), maybe he could attempt that at the same type.
8120691 Mario setting up e-mail in pony Equestria maybe?
8120681 Well, thank you. I never really thought that my writing was that great to begin with, and I used to have a hard time writing myself. Maybe you'll get better with it over time?
8120698 That would be interesting. Mario has had nearly every job in existence. I suppose he could add programmer, engineer, and electrician to his belt.
8120716 and due to the "magic" of technology, emails can be sent to canterlot high and back
8120718 Maybe by borrowing the magic from the two journals. This could actually work somewhat in the story. If I use it, I'll make sure to credit you for the idea.
8120745 thanks but you don't have to i just helped expend an idea you already had
8120753 I actually want to do it. I don't like the idea of using other people's ideas without at least giving them credit.
8120786 ok if you insist
8120744 I will continue to write, and hopefully I'll manage to write something that catches your attention at some point. And I'm going to keep an out for your future works as well.
YES!!! My waifu AND my OC villain in the same cheeapter! Shadestar is like the Dimentio/Antasma of my universe. Just so you know. And PS... 50 Star Points (
x 50) for doing this. You now have 95. (Ask if you want to know the reason)
8131886 What's the reason?
8131900 15 for being my friend, 15 more for giving me advice, and 15 more for taking my advice. That's 45, and 50 for the cheeapter makes 95.
8131908 Thanks for the explanation.
Fuckin awsom keep righting
love it so fare hope you right soon
8137458 I'm hoping to have another chapter up soon.
8120816
so unless this refers to another certain green unicorn, than lyra is oddly enough a stallion here.
8163883 It refer's to the disguise of Shadestar, an OC that Sky Blue CMC has been kind enough to let me borrow for this story here.
OH MY LUNA I LOVE THIS CHEEAPTER SO MUCH!!!! (✨ x 20) You now have 480 Star Points.
8284446 Thank you! Both for the support and the Star Points.
...beautiful destruction. That's all I can say. One minor problem though: Switching tenses. The tense kept switching from past to present back and forth. Pick one and stick with it. I'd recommend past. That was the easiest one for most of the stories I wrote.
8292026 Thanks for the tip!
8292026 I went ahead and tweaked it so that it is completely in the past tense.
8786251 That would actually be an interesting idea. I can try to include it in a later chapter (credit will be given).
8802933 Probably not. I plan on including Paper Mario as a separate entity later on.
8802961 In which way? As a method of passing obstacles like rocks and barrels? Or as a method of attack?
8803018 I can have him use the hammer in both methods, especially since a lot of the Special/Bros attacks use hammers, like Chopper Bros., for instance. And yes and no in that case. He will be defeated and come back, but it's through the use of a 1-UP used postmortem.
8803030 You know what? I'm not gonna even try to touch that, since Nintendo themselves don't even know the answer to that. He goes back and forth from being able to hold his breath indefinitely in the 2D platformers and 3D Land and 3D World, to having a limited amount of oxygen like in 64 (DS), Sunshine, Galaxy, Galaxy 2, and Odyssey.
8803041 Likely.
8803050 Honestly, I could try the other option though. For some odd reason, he can't breathe in water in 3D, but he can in space.
8803059 Nope. He'd be able to breathe underwater if he was a god. He is a confirmed king, however.
8804607 Honestly, I didn't give the Doc enough time in the story, she may have to make a return at some point. It would probably have him try that at that point in time.
8850781 Depends. What are we considering for it? We have 2D/3D Land & 3D World (where he has a time limit), the other 3D platformers (where he doesn't), the RPGs, etc.
9260409 To be honest, that would probably be better idea for Luigi, since he's the better jumper.