After returning from Camp Everfree, Sunset and her friends are in for yet another surprise when they learn of the human Sunset that is living in their world. Can Sunset learn to deal with the permanent effects she has caused to the human world?
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I get where he's coming from, act 2 is pretty much Shimmer being the worst and then when it's all over before she can make up for everything she did she dies which just ends up feeling like more manipulation from her, like you can't be angry at her cause she died . It's kind of a big issue I have as well, you spend all of act 2 making me hate Shimmer then kill her off and make her the driving force for emo Sunset in act 3 which only makes me hate Shimmer more.
Well, no surprise there. Figured it out when she said she had a grudge and it was confirmed when she had definitive magic with proper control.
holy crap...didn't see this coming in a million years!!!!
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All intentional!
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Congrats!
However... There is way more too it that you have yet to realize due to the limited info. Act IV will go into this more, but no spoilers.
Normally I would leave some comment about how angry I am (again), but I'm like the choice of Ghost's identity. I suspected it would be someone from Crystal Prep, or some OC which has an entire chapter devoted to their back story.
I'll be honest though, not suprised that it is Adagio. Should've seen it sooner.
One question: do Aria and Sonata play some part with all of this? Or did I miss something? Or is it spoilers?
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Adagio's inclusion in the story was actually hinted at VERY VERY VERY subtly but you would have to have been playing extra extra extra close attention to have noticed it. If you pay attention you'll also realize that... Not all is as it seems... I can't spoil anything about that but all I can say is pay close attention as you may start to piece together the larger mysteries that are about to unfold.
There are deep connections of many elements that have been being weaved throughout the story and they will contribute to the big pay off in the end. By Act III you are seeing the beginning of the forging of that web and the strings that connect it. Everything is connected.
And as for the other two sirens... You'll see them/what's going on with them next chapter.
Also surprised no one noticed that Adagio cut her hair!
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I did notice the hair, but just shrugged it off as the artist's style. Plus, let's be honest, is it really that important?
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Nah not really. She mostly cut it just to fit in the mask, but it was a cute little detail. :P
how did adagio control twilight you even point out she lost her necklace and even if it was repaired that not how her powers work she needs to sing and even then it dont work freely the people need to be fighting with some one or something she controls negative emotions
and also how did moondancer get all this information she has gathered it just feels like a contrivance
I love emo sunset
Well... Up until this point I was convinced it was actually Starlight Glimmer under "Ghost's" mask. Well played.
AHAHHAAHHAAAA IM RIGHT!
Wow. And I thought I was pissed off at Cozy Glow after S8 ended. Your usage of Adagio here made my blood boil the entire time.