After returning from Camp Everfree, Sunset and her friends are in for yet another surprise when they learn of the human Sunset that is living in their world. Can Sunset learn to deal with the permanent effects she has caused to the human world?
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I wanna know what happened with the Apple Parents, their time in the mountain and Rarirty coming to the rescue sounds rather interesting. Is that going to be another side story? The picture for this chapter was adorable. Well done Darlings
guessing Shimmer breaks up with Adagio after she tells her shes a siren thinking shes crazy.
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It's a potential side story at some point.
Beginning to wonder if your lesbians don't understand how reproduction works. Especially glaring was Twilight's debate whether Sunset's children would be human or alien.
Or maybe you skipped over all the girls dicks.
Now, I am aware there there have been what might have been successful experiments with...'fertilizing'(unsure of proper term) an egg with another woman's egg. Can't remember what the process was called or anymore particulars so afraid I can't google it. But either acknowledge that their tech is more advanced or rephrase/stop having every lesbian dream of kids! "Having' kids, especially with a partner, does NOT infer adoption or surrogacy to me.
Sunset's refusal to visit Equestria, and Celestia is getting grating at this point. Yes, she is afraid she massively disappointed the only mother figure who cared about her...yet talks frequently to Twilight through the journal Celestia gave her! I get the feeling she's been really vague about Equestria to her therapists/about the possibility of getting closure to this particular wound.
I love the character interactions of the story, why I've read so far,but every so often there's a bit that draws me out of the story and go "wtf". Demons, ascension after ascension, the Everfree not being a thing let alone the Everfree Castle, siren time travel...
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She is merely meaning to have a child and raise it together with Sunset, it’s not intended as completely literal here.
I can’t comment on any of that other stuff though because it would be very spoiler filled. I won’t confirm or deny your suspicions but I can say that a lot of that stuff will be “dealt with” eventually.
Well, no wonder Sirens are almost extinct. The fact that there are more than 4 is frankly a miracle in and of itself for them at this point.
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Wait until you get to Act VI, there is a lot more explained on how they managed to survive for so long. I won't spoil it though!