After returning from Camp Everfree, Sunset and her friends are in for yet another surprise when they learn of the human Sunset that is living in their world. Can Sunset learn to deal with the permanent effects she has caused to the human world?
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She better not come back or be staying in Twilight body like some ghost ro some else or twilight saved ehr dam ass somehow, in secret.
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Spooky ghost.
In all seriousness, to learn more about Adagio's history and perhaps begin to understand why the Princess is suddenly showing compassion to her, be sure to check out the upcoming Silence of a Siren, side story. It tells the tale of Adagio BEFORE all of this happened. Takes place sometime shortly after the Battle of the Bands.
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Eeehh maybe....i feel something for this version, but she commited cold blood murder, she shot someone eight times, four times reloaded then four more times.
Then she feels bad?
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Perhaps there was more to it than that. ;)
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Also consider this:
We as the reader never ACTUALLY saw Adagio pull the trigger did we?
just faved this when i got time im gonna give this a look
Whew. You're definitely not pulling any punches when it comes to intensity.
I'm comfuuuuused...
Too many secrets, heh.
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Yeah, but the rest of Act IV focuses on other issues. You'll see what I mean though. There is things that were planted in Acts I-III that will become INSANELY important by Acts VI and VII.
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All the secrets will be revealed in due time!
You know, exact words are a funny thing, she's technically not lying since she was trying to kill Sunset.
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Very astute of you.
Wait until you find that there's even more to it than THAT. There's much more happening that will complicate the matter further.
This story really needs a mystery tag. I feel like were missing something almost every other chapter.
Why aren't you writing regular mystery novels? This has been something that I would love to read in physical book form.
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I actually am working on an actual book. I sort of use this story to kind of "practice" so to speak.
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First thing I am going to say: Respect.
There is a big difference between offering criticism and being disrespectful, you're teetering between that line right now. Starting a post with "that is the dumbest thing I've ever read", is not useful criticism, it's an insult. Respect goes a long way, and it is expected in this comment section not just toward myself but everyone in the comment section.
I have respected you and allowed you to voice your criticisms almost weekly without much flack, but I'm not going to tolerate insults and unconstructive criticism.
It's clear you're not enjoying the story anymore, so I implore you to cease reading if that is the case. It happens, I've had my share of fics that I stopped enjoying, so I just stop reading then.
You played the bad guy one too many times, you have had many chances. It's time for your end