After returning from Camp Everfree, Sunset and her friends are in for yet another surprise when they learn of the human Sunset that is living in their world. Can Sunset learn to deal with the permanent effects she has caused to the human world?
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Thank you, Captain Sisko:
Jokes aside, yay, engaged Sunset and Twilight and pregnant Rarity, can't wait to see where this goes.
uh, actually its every thirty moons, not every 40 moons
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Minor typo, fixed though!
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Yay!
aaahh now all caught up after a Christmas break. you were right. this act is getting of to a tremendous start!
Greetings.
I haven't read through the entire story yet, but there are some questions I would like to ask.
Okay, it's not really a question, but more like a thing that stands out and I wanted to comment on. There's a lot of same sex couples in the story. In fact, it looks like there's nothing but same sex couples in the story. As far as Sunset and Sci-Twi goes, it makes sense. They're the main couple, so to speak, so it's perfectly understandable. With others, however, it feels a bit ... weird.
Could it be it was done for the sake of simplicity? I mean it is easier to have Rarity and Applejack get together just like Rainbow and Fluttershy instead of adding new characters as their second halves. New characters that would have to interact with the existing ones. I don't mean anything bad by this, just an observation.
Also related to the same sex couples. Does biology work a bit differently in this story? Pretty much all the couples talk about having kids and now that Rarity is pregnant with, as she says "hers and Applejack's kid" it is starting to get strange. Sure, it is entirely possible that they're talking about adoption or using a sperm donor. It's just that it's never mentioned in the story, not even in passing. The only thing we get is "having kids". Eventually it gets to the point where I feel like I'm missing something.