After returning from Camp Everfree, Sunset and her friends are in for yet another surprise when they learn of the human Sunset that is living in their world. Can Sunset learn to deal with the permanent effects she has caused to the human world?
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i hope it makes more sense later cuz im getting soooo confused lol i mean im enjoying it greatly and im always eagerly waiting the next chapter but all this not knowing is killing me
Had to stop reading this.
Why?
Because it has so many bloody flashbacks, it will get you whiplash!
After some time, it feels as if every other paragraph starts with "one week ago", "one month ago", "three years ago", "three days ago" ...
This is so incredibly unenjoyable to read, I'd rather abandon this halfway through than suffer any more of this.
Which is a shame, since it started quite promising.
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Part II of Act VII is a lot of "backstory" but I can assure you that once part II is finished we basically are out of flashback territory. There really won't be any more "backstory" to tell at that point. Part III (which is the final part) is basically "how it all comes together."
Without spoiling anything I can at least say that part III begins pretty much at the exact moment where Part I ends and moves forward from there. Literally, the final part has 0 flashbacks planned lol.
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Part II of Act VII? I endured barely halfway through Act III!
You mean it gets even worse???
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I mean it varries.